朋友— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答结构基本清楚：先比较过去和现在，再说明原因。但有较多语法和词汇错误，例如“usually meet”应为“usually met”，“quite”应为“quiet”，“reverse”应为“revise”，“usually meeting”应为“usually meet”，“meal size”应改为“a meal”，“relaxed press”应改为“relaxed place”。建议使用过去时和现在时进行明确对比，并用“whereas”或“while”连接两个阶段；同时避免不自然的表达。

示例: Yes, there is a clear difference. When I was in high school, I usually met my friends in the school library because it was quiet and we could revise together. Nowadays, we usually meet at restaurants to have a meal and catch up after work, as they offer a more relaxed atmosphere.

建议: 回答提到了安静场所和嘈杂场所，但第二部分的意思不清楚，影响交流效果。应直接说明合适场所的特点，例如安静、舒适、方便交谈，并解释不合适场所的问题，例如噪音大、难以听清对方。注意名词和动词形式，如“quiet places”“a good environment for meeting”“noisy places”“listen clearly”。

示例: Some places are suitable because they are quiet and comfortable, so people can focus on the conversation. For example, a café with soft music is a good choice. In contrast, very noisy places are inconvenient because it can be difficult to hear what the other person is saying.

建议: 观点明确，但表达重复且部分句子无法理解，例如“my friend saying”和“I don't need a lesson”。应使用“I prefer spending time with one close friend”，并解释一对一交流更深入、更容易了解彼此。避免重复使用“friend”，可使用“someone close to me”或“we”。

示例: I prefer spending time with one close friend. One-to-one conversations are usually more meaningful because we can talk openly without being interrupted. It is also easier to understand each other’s feelings and give personal advice.

建议: 回答内容相关，也提供了购物和做饭的具体细节，但语法需要改进：“like to invite friends”，“invite my friends to join a party”，“fresh vegetables and other ingredients”。最后一句是句子残缺，应改成完整句，并使用连接词使内容更自然。

示例: Yes, I would. I enjoy inviting my friends over because we can go shopping for fresh vegetables and other ingredients together. Then, we can cook dinner at my place and enjoy a relaxing evening. It feels both enjoyable and fulfilling.

建议: 回答有明确观点和例子，能够说明朋友在压力时提供支持，但语法错误较多，例如“people are good listening”应改为“friends are good listeners”，“I has”应为“I have”，“a good advice”应为“good advice”，“can makes”应为“can make”。另外，前面说“friends”，后面主要谈“girlfriend”，可以说明她是你的亲密朋友，以保持逻辑一致。

示例: Friends are extremely important to me because they provide emotional support. When I feel stressed and need someone to talk to, I usually turn to my girlfriend, who is also my closest friend. She gives me useful advice and helps me feel happier and more relaxed.

建议: 回答直接，并说明了频率、原因和活动，内容较完整。需要纠正“my friend”可改为“my friends”，“After the weekend”应改为“On weekends”，“the enjoying”应改为“enjoy”，“exciting”描述事物，描述人的感受应使用“excited”。还可以增加一个具体活动来丰富答案。

示例: Yes, I usually go out with my friends every weekend because that is normally our only day off. We often visit a local restaurant and enjoy a delicious meal together. Sometimes we also take a walk afterward, which helps us relax and catch up.

建议: 回答能给出餐厅这一地点，但内容重复，且有明显语法问题。“It depends on my friends”比“It’s depending on my friend”自然；“my friend wants to eat delicious food”应使用第三人称单数；“try a different restaurant”后应说明原因。建议用“usually”直接回答，并减少重复的“We go to the restaurant together”。

示例: We often meet at restaurants, although it depends on what my friends feel like doing. If we want to try some delicious food, we choose a new restaurant and book a table in advance. I enjoy this because we can discover different places together.

建议: 回答给出了具体活动——爬山，也提到了交通方式和感受，内容方向正确。但“will all favor”应改为“both enjoy”，“at weekend”应为“at weekends”，“go hiking in the mountains”比“go to hiking to mountains”自然；“the hiking all days”应改为“hike all day”。建议使用现在时描述日常习惯。

示例: My friends and I both enjoy hiking in the mountains. At weekends, we usually drive there and spend the whole day outdoors. It is a great way to exercise, enjoy nature and relax together, so it makes me feel healthy and happy.

建议: 这是本组中较完整的回答：直接回答问题，提供了认识时间、保持联系的方式和共同兴趣。需要改进语法和搭配：“We were know”应为“We have known each other”，“similar interest”应为“similar interests”，“go to movie”应为“go to the movies”。注意避免“meet up to catch up”重复，可改为“meet up and catch up”。

示例: Yes, I have a close friend whom I have known since high school, so we have been friends for about ten years. We still keep in touch regularly and get on very well because we share similar interests. Whenever we have time, we meet up, catch up and go to the movies together.

× Yes, when I was in high school I usually meet my friends in the school library because it was quite and we could use the study rooms to reverse together.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school, I usually met my friends in the school library because it was quiet, and we could use the study rooms to rehearse together.

“When I was in high school”表示过去时间，因此主句中的“meet”应使用过去式“met”。

× Yes, when I was in high school I usually meet my friends in the school library because it was quite and we could use the study rooms to reverse together.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school, I usually met my friends in the school library because it was quiet, and we could use the study rooms to rehearse together.

“quite”是副词，表示“相当”；这里需要形容环境安静的形容词“quiet”。

× Now I usually meeting my friends at restaurants to dine out and catch up over a meal size.

✓ Now I usually meet my friends at restaurants to dine out and catch up over a meal.

频率副词“usually”后面接一般现在时动词原形，所以应使用“meet”，不能使用“meeting”。

× In my view, I think the quiet place can boost their focus on their conversations and they can have a good environment to meetings.

✓ In my view, I think a quiet place can help them focus on their conversations, and they can have a good environment for meeting.

介词“for”后面可以接动名词，因此使用“meeting”；“to meetings”结构错误。

× However, if people like meeting at the noise place, they can listening clear the peoples holiday saying.

✓ However, if people like meeting in a noisy place, they may not be able to hear people clearly when they are talking.

“noise”是名词，修饰名词“place”时应使用形容词“noisy”。“clear”修饰动词“hear”时应使用副词“clearly”。

× However, if people like meeting at the noise place, they can listening clear the peoples holiday saying.

✓ However, if people like meeting in a noisy place, they may not be able to hear people clearly when they are talking.

情态动词“can”后面应接动词原形，不能接“listening”。本句使用“may not be able to hear”表达更准确。

× However, if people like meeting at the noise place, they can listening clear the peoples holiday saying.

✓ However, if people like meeting in a noisy place, they may not be able to hear people clearly when they are talking.

表示在某个环境中见面时，通常使用介词“in”，所以应说“in a noisy place”，而不是“at the noise place”。

× I prefer to spending my own time with my one close friend because I want to focus on my friend so I can understand my friend saying I don't need a lesson.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one close friend because I want to focus on my friend so that I can understand what my friend is saying.

“prefer to”后面接动词原形，因此应为“prefer to spend”。“what my friend is saying”是正确的宾语从句结构。

× I prefer to spending my own time with my one close friend because I want to focus on my friend so I can understand my friend saying I don't need a lesson.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one close friend because I want to focus on my friend so that I can understand what my friend is saying.

这里泛指一位亲密朋友，使用“one close friend”即可；“my one close friend”表达不自然。

× Another people saying and meeting with one friend can have a good conversation.

✓ Other people say that meeting with one friend can lead to a good conversation.

“people”本身是复数，不能使用单数修饰词“another”。应使用“other people”。

× Another people saying and meeting with one friend can have a good conversation.

✓ Other people say that meeting with one friend can lead to a good conversation.

主语“other people”是复数，一般现在时应使用“say”，不能使用“saying”。

× Yes, I really like invite friend join the party at my house because we can go to the supermarket and buy fresh vegetable and the food.

✓ Yes, I really like inviting friends to join the party at my house because we can go to the supermarket and buy fresh vegetables and food.

“like”后面可以接动名词，因此应使用“inviting”。“invite”后面接人和动作时，需要使用“invite friends to join”。

× Yes, I really like invite friend join the party at my house because we can go to the supermarket and buy fresh vegetable and the food.

✓ Yes, I really like inviting friends to join the party at my house because we can go to the supermarket and buy fresh vegetables and food.

通常邀请不止一位朋友，因此“friend”应改为复数“friends”；可数名词“vegetable”在这里也应使用复数“vegetables”。

× Very happy and fulfilling.

✓ It is very happy and fulfilling.

原句只有形容词短语，没有完整的主语和谓语。需要添加主语“it”和系动词“is”。更自然的表达是“It makes me feel very happy and fulfilled”。

× In my opinion people are good listening to me.

✓ In my opinion, people are good at listening to me.

固定搭配是“be good at doing something”，因此“good”后面需要介词“at”，再接动名词“listening”。

× For example, when I feel I has a lot of stress for and I want to talk with someone, I will choose to talk with my girlfriend because my close friend will give me a good advice and can makes me feel very happy and relaxed.

✓ For example, when I feel I have a lot of stress and want to talk with someone, I will choose to talk with my girlfriend because my close friend will give me good advice and can make me feel very happy and relaxed.

主语“I”后面应使用“have”，不能使用“has”。“can”后面也应使用动词原形“make”，不能使用“makes”。

× For example, when I feel I has a lot of stress for and I want to talk with someone, I will choose to talk with my girlfriend because my close friend will give me a good advice and can makes me feel very happy and relaxed.

✓ For example, when I feel I have a lot of stress and want to talk with someone, I will choose to talk with my girlfriend because my close friend will give me good advice and can make me feel very happy and relaxed.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形，所以应为“can make”，而不是“can makes”。

× For example, when I feel I has a lot of stress for and I want to talk with someone, I will choose to talk with my girlfriend because my close friend will give me a good advice and can makes me feel very happy and relaxed.

✓ For example, when I feel I have a lot of stress and want to talk with someone, I will choose to talk with my girlfriend because my close friend will give me good advice and can make me feel very happy and relaxed.

“advice”是不可数名词，不能与“a”连用。应说“some advice”或直接说“good advice”。

× I usually hang out with my friend every weekend because we only have a day off.

✓ I usually hang out with my friends every weekend because we only have a day off.

根据上下文，学生谈论的是朋友群体，因此“friend”应改为复数“friends”。

× After the weekend, we usually go to the local restaurant and the enjoying the delicious food together.

✓ After the weekend, we usually go to a local restaurant and enjoy delicious food together.

并列结构中“go”和“enjoy”都应使用一般现在时动词原形，不能使用“the enjoying”。

× It makes me feel very happy and exciting.

✓ It makes me feel very happy and excited.

“exciting”描述令人兴奋的事物；“excited”描述人的感受。这里主语是“我”，所以应使用“excited”。

× It's depending on my friend, uh, for example, my friend want to eat her the delicious food at the restaurant and then we will book the restaurant and we hang out together.

✓ It depends on my friends. For example, if my friend wants to eat delicious food at a restaurant, we will book a table and hang out together.

“depend”表示一般情况时使用一般现在时“depends”，不能使用“is depending”。

× It's depending on my friend, uh, for example, my friend want to eat her the delicious food at the restaurant and then we will book the restaurant and we hang out together.

✓ It depends on my friends. For example, if my friend wants to eat delicious food at a restaurant, we will book a table and hang out together.

主语“my friend”是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时动词“want”应改为“wants”。

× It's depending on my friend, uh, for example, my friend want to eat her the delicious food at the restaurant and then we will book the restaurant and we hang out together.

✓ It depends on my friends. For example, if my friend wants to eat delicious food at a restaurant, we will book a table and hang out together.

“her”在这里没有合适的语法作用，应删除。如果想表达“她想吃”，可以说“she wants to eat”。

× Umm, every time I try different restaurant makes me feel very exciting.

✓ Umm, every time I try a different restaurant, it makes me feel very excited.

单数可数名词“restaurant”前需要冠词，因此应使用“a different restaurant”。

× Umm, every time I try different restaurant makes me feel very exciting.

✓ Umm, every time I try a different restaurant, it makes me feel very excited.

描述人的感受时使用“excited”，而不是描述事物的“exciting”。

× My friend and I will all favor hiking to mountains.

✓ My friend and I both enjoy hiking in the mountains.

“will all favor hiking to mountains”结构不正确。表达“都喜欢爬山”时，可以使用“both enjoy hiking in the mountains”。

× For example, at weekend we hang out together, go to hiking to mountains.

✓ For example, at the weekend, we hang out together and go hiking in the mountains.

“weekend”前需要冠词，常说“at the weekend”。“go hiking”是固定搭配，不使用“to”。

× For example, at weekend we hang out together, go to hiking to mountains.

✓ For example, at the weekend, we hang out together and go hiking in the mountains.

“go”后表示进行某项活动时使用“go hiking”，而不是“go to hiking”。

× We're driving our car and the hiking all days.

✓ We drive our car there and hike all day.

“the hiking”不能在这里作谓语。并列谓语应使用“drive”和“hike”；“all day”表示“一整天”。

× We were know each other for about 10 years.

✓ We have known each other for about 10 years.

“for about 10 years”表示从过去持续到现在，应使用现在完成时“have known”，不能使用“were know”。

× We still keep in touch regularly and get on very well because we share similar interest and often meet up to catch up and go to movie together.

✓ We still keep in touch regularly and get on very well because we share similar interests and often meet up to catch up and go to the movies together.

“similar interests”表示多个相似的兴趣，因此“interest”应使用复数形式“interests”。

× We still keep in touch regularly and get on very well because we share similar interest and often meet up to catch up and go to movie together.

✓ We still keep in touch regularly and get on very well because we share similar interests and often meet up to catch up and go to the movies together.

“movie”是单数可数名词，前面需要限定词；表示去电影院看电影时，常用固定表达“go to the movies”。