广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了购买前查看信息的原因。注意区分广告和消费者评价；“good for value”应改为“good value for money”或“worth the price”。可以用更自然的表达说明广告如何影响你的决定，并补充一个具体产品例子。

示例: Yes, I have. When I was looking for a pair of headphones, I saw an online ad that caught my attention. I checked the customer reviews as well, and they convinced me that the headphones were good value for money.

建议: 意思基本清楚，但有多处语法和搭配问题：“a app”应为“an app”；“products which recommend it”不自然，可说“ads for products”；“true price”可改为“affordable price”或“discounted price”。建议用一个具体广告类型补充说明。

示例: Yes, I see them quite often, especially when I open social media apps or watch videos online. The ads are usually for food delivery, clothes, or electronic devices, and they often highlight discounts or special features.

建议: 这段回答有具体广告和个人反应，内容较完整。表达“我以前没想到这种设计”时应说“I had never thought of such a design”；“phone folder”应改为“foldable phone”。避免重复使用“amazing”，并可以补充广告给你留下印象的原因。

示例: Yes. I remember an advert for a mobile phone that could fold in half. I was fascinated because I had never seen a foldable phone before, and the design seemed incredibly futuristic. It made me curious about how phones might change in the future.

建议: 回答切题，并举了广告商品的例子，但语法和用词错误较多。“transportations”通常应使用不可数的“transport”或说“public transport”；“to in increase”应为“to increase”；“propagate”不适合描述广告，可用“be displayed”或“be advertised”。建议说明广告通常出现在哪里。

示例: Yes, I see quite a lot of ads on public transport. They are often displayed inside trains or at bus stops, and they usually promote things like food, drinks, or mobile phones. I think companies use these spaces because many commuters see the ads every day.

建议: 你表达了“有时喜欢、有时不喜欢”的观点，但开头句子不完整且有重复；“too much advertisements”应为“too many advertisements”。可以先直接说明态度，再用“because”解释广告何时有用、何时令人厌烦。

示例: It depends. I like advertisements when I am comparing products because they can help me learn about different features and prices. However, I find it annoying when the same ad appears repeatedly, especially while I am watching videos.

建议: 你的偏好明确，但句子较长，且有主谓一致和词形错误：“advertisements that clearly shows”应为“advertisements that clearly show”；“clear show”应为“clearly show”。“value and its price”表达含混，建议明确说广告应展示产品的优点、价格和质量。

示例: I like informative advertisements that clearly explain a product’s main features and price. It is especially helpful when they compare the product with similar options without making exaggerated claims. That way, I can decide whether it is good quality and worth the money.

× Yes, actually, if I don't know what to buy, I will search for some advertisement and read some people's remarks so that I can decide whether this item is good for value or whether it has good quality.

✓ Yes, actually, if I don't know what to buy, I will search for some advertisements and read some people's remarks so that I can decide whether this item is good for value or whether it has good quality.

“some”后面通常接可数名词复数，因此这里应将“advertisement”改为“advertisements”。

× Yes, actually, if I don't know what to buy, I will search for some advertisement and read some people's remarks so that I can decide whether this item is good for value or whether it has good quality.

✓ Yes, actually, if I don't know what to buy, I will search for some advertisements and read some people's remarks so that I can decide whether this item is good value for money or whether it has good quality.

表达“性价比好”时，常用固定说法“good value for money”，而不是“good for value”。

× Of course, when I open a app, it is common to see a lot of advertisements like food or some products which recommend it, uh, with its good quality and its true price.

✓ Of course, when I open an app, it is common to see a lot of advertisements like food or some products which recommend it, uh, with its good quality and its true price.

“app”以元音音素开头，因此前面的不定冠词应使用“an”，而不是“a”。

× Of course, when I open a app, it is common to see a lot of advertisements like food or some products which recommend it, uh, with its good quality and its true price.

✓ Of course, when I open an app, it is common to see a lot of advertisements for food or products that promote their good quality and fair prices.

原句中的“products”是复数，后面用“it”和“its”指代会造成单复数不一致。复数名词应使用“they/their”。修改后的句子也让代词指向更清楚。

× Yes, it was an advertisement for a mobile that could be folded in half. I was amazed at that time because I hadn't thought such design before and I had never seen a phone folder like that.

✓ Yes, it was an advertisement for a mobile that could be folded in half. I was amazed at that time because I hadn't thought of such a design before and I had never seen a phone folder like that.

“such”后面的可数单数名词“design”需要加不定冠词“a”，构成“such a design”。

× Yes, it was an advertisement for a mobile that could be folded in half. I was amazed at that time because I hadn't thought such design before and I had never seen a phone folder like that.

✓ Yes, it was an advertisement for a mobile that could be folded in half. I was amazed at that time because I hadn't thought of such a design before and I had never seen a phone folder like that.

表示“想到某事”时，动词“think”后通常要加介词“of”，所以应说“think of such a design”。

× Yes, some people make advertisements on trains or other transportations to in increase their fame and promote their product.

✓ Yes, some people make advertisements on trains or other forms of transportation to increase their fame and promote their product.

“transportation”通常作为不可数名词使用，不用复数形式“transportations”。这里可说“other forms of transportation”（其他形式的交通工具/运输方式）。

× Yes, some people make advertisements on trains or other transportations to in increase their fame and promote their product.

✓ Yes, some people make advertisements on trains or other forms of transportation to increase their fame and promote their product.

“to”后面应直接接动词原形“increase”，不能再插入“in”。应使用“to increase”。

× Well, it depends if I haven't decided what to buy or to but to choose which type.

✓ Well, it depends on whether I have decided what to buy or which type to choose.

“depend”表示“取决于”时，通常使用“depend on”。因此应说“it depends on whether…”。

× Well, it depends if I haven't decided what to buy or to but to choose which type.

✓ Well, it depends on whether I have decided what to buy or which type to choose.

原句中“to but to choose”结构重复且不完整。修改后用“what to buy”和“which type to choose”形成平行结构，使句子更清楚。

× But sometimes too much advertisements make me feel bored and. Uncomfortable.

✓ But sometimes too many advertisements make me feel bored and uncomfortable.

“advertisements”是可数名词复数，应使用“too many”，而不是修饰不可数名词的“too much”。

× But sometimes too much advertisements make me feel bored and. Uncomfortable.

✓ But sometimes too many advertisements make me feel bored and uncomfortable.

“bored”和“uncomfortable”由“and”连接，应放在同一个完整句子中。不能在“and”后用句号把句子拆开。

× I love the advertisements that clearly shows its merits compared with other products and I hope it can clear show the value and its price also the quality of it in on the advertisement.

✓ I love advertisements that clearly show a product's merits compared with those of other products, and I hope they can clearly show the product's value, price, and quality in the advertisements.

关系从句的主语是复数“advertisements”，因此谓语动词应使用原形“show”，不能用第三人称单数形式“shows”。

× I love the advertisements that clearly shows its merits compared with other products and I hope it can clear show the value and its price also the quality of it in on the advertisement.

✓ I love advertisements that clearly show a product's merits compared with those of other products, and I hope they can clearly show the product's value, price, and quality in the advertisements.

“advertisements”是复数，后文应用“they”指代，不能用单数“it”。此外，修改后用“a product's”和“the product's”明确表示价值、价格和质量属于产品。

× I love the advertisements that clearly shows its merits compared with other products and I hope it can clear show the value and its price also the quality of it in on the advertisement.

✓ I love advertisements that clearly show a product's merits compared with those of other products, and I hope they can clearly show the product's value, price, and quality in the advertisements.

这里需要用副词修饰动词“show”，所以应将形容词“clear”改为副词“clearly”。

× I love the advertisements that clearly shows its merits compared with other products and I hope it can clear show the value and its price also the quality of it in on the advertisement.

✓ I love advertisements that clearly show a product's merits compared with those of other products, and I hope they can clearly show the product's value, price, and quality in the advertisements.

表示内容出现在广告里面时，使用介词“in”即可；原句中的“in on”重复使用了介词。

× I love the advertisements that clearly shows its merits compared with other products and I hope it can clear show the value and its price also the quality of it in on the advertisement.

✓ I love advertisements that clearly show a product's merits compared with those of other products, and I hope they can clearly show the product's value, price, and quality in the advertisements.

列举“value、price、quality”时，最后两项之间需要用“and”连接。修改后的并列结构为“value, price, and quality”。

× I love the advertisements that clearly shows its merits compared with other products and I hope it can clear show the value and its price also the quality of it in on the advertisement.

✓ I love advertisements that clearly show a product's merits compared with those of other products, and I hope they can clearly show the product's value, price, and quality in the advertisements.

原句把“merits”（优点）与“other products”（其他产品）直接比较，比较对象不一致。应比较产品的优点与其他产品的优点，因此改为“a product's merits compared with those of other products”。