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Part 1

考官

Have you ever bought something because of an advertisement?

考生

Of course this thing is cosmetic to be honest I'm not interested in any cosmetic but last year I saw a advertisement, it was very interesting. So I'm fascinating about advertisement.

考官

Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?

考生

I usually sold the advertised by using my phone because I usually I usually enjoy watching YouTube When I watch YouTube, I usually watch the many advertises because YouTube provides many advertises.

考官

Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?

考生

Of course, although when I was childhood, the country of advertisement is very impression for me because I enjoyed I really liked many snacks when I was childhood so one time I saw the country advertisement but at

考官

Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?

考生

When I take the subway, I usually see many a lot of advertisements. I think when I usually use the five line, there are many advertises in five line. I think it is a great way to

考官

Do you like advertisements?

考生

Of course, I like the advertisement. I think advertisement are great way to provide many information and then advertisement help me when I when I buy some product. So it is that's why advertisement

考官

What kind of advertising do you like?

考生

video advertisement is my favorite type of video advertisement because video advertisement have many information and also it is so very interesting. So when I watch YouTube I saw

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Part 1

Have you ever bought something because of an advertisement?

分数: 38.0

建议: 질문에 먼저 “Yes, I have”라고 답한 뒤, 광고를 보고 실제로 산 제품이 무엇인지 구체적으로 말해 주세요. “a advertisement”는 “an advertisement”, “I’m fascinating”은 “I was fascinated”로 고치고, 광고가 구매에 어떤 영향을 주었는지 덧붙이면 답변이 더 자연스럽습니다.

示例: Yes, I have. Last year, I bought a cosmetic product after seeing an interesting advertisement, even though I’m not usually interested in cosmetics. The ad showed how the product could improve my skin, so I decided to give it a try.

Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?

分数: 28.0

建议: 광고를 자주 보는지 먼저 분명하게 답하고, 휴대폰으로 YouTube를 볼 때 광고를 접한다고 설명해 보세요. “sold the advertised”는 의미가 불분명하므로 “see advertisements”라고 하고, 반복되는 “usually”와 “advertises”는 각각 “ads”로 간결하게 정리하는 것이 좋습니다.

示例: Yes, I often see ads on my phone, especially when I watch YouTube. They usually appear before or during a video. Some are relevant to things I’ve searched for, but others can be a little repetitive.

Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?

分数: 18.0

建议: 어린 시절 기억에 남는 광고가 있었는지 직접 답한 다음, 어떤 제품의 광고였는지와 왜 기억에 남았는지를 설명해 보세요. “when I was childhood” 대신 “when I was a child”, “very impression” 대신 “made a strong impression on me”를 사용하세요. 답변이 중간에 끊기지 않도록 완결된 문장으로 마무리하세요.

示例: Yes, I remember a snack advertisement from when I was a child. It showed children sharing colorful treats, and the music was really catchy. I liked snacks at the time, so the ad made me want to try the product.

Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?

分数: 23.0

建议: 지하철에서 광고를 많이 보는지 먼저 답하고, 어느 노선에서 어떤 형태의 광고를 보는지 한 가지 예를 들어 주세요. “many a lot of”처럼 중복되는 표현은 “a lot of”로 정리하고, “advertises” 대신 명사 “advertisements”를 사용하세요. 마지막 생각도 완성된 문장으로 끝내세요.

示例: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on the subway, especially on Line 5, which I use regularly. There are posters inside the trains and digital screens at some stations. I think these ads are effective because commuters see them during their journeys.

Do you like advertisements?

分数: 35.0

建议: 광고를 좋아하는지 먼저 명확히 답한 뒤, 어떤 점에서 유용한지 설명해 보세요. “advertisement”를 일반적인 의미로 쓸 때는 “advertising” 또는 “advertisements”가 자연스럽고, “many information”은 셀 수 없는 명사이므로 “a lot of information”으로 고치세요. 반복을 줄이고 마지막에 생각을 완결하세요.

示例: Yes, I do, especially when the ads are informative rather than pushy. They can help me compare products and learn about new options before I buy something. However, I don’t enjoy ads that interrupt videos too often.

What kind of advertising do you like?

分数: 32.0

建议: 좋아하는 광고의 종류를 먼저 말하고, 영상 광고의 어떤 요소가 흥미로운지 구체적으로 설명해 보세요. “video advertisement”의 관사와 단복수에 주의해 “video ads”라고 표현하고, “have”는 주어에 맞게 “have” 또는 “include”를 사용하세요. “so very”처럼 겹치는 강조 표현과 반복을 줄이고 답변을 완성하세요.

示例: I like video advertisements best, particularly short and creative ones. They can combine visuals, music, and a clear explanation, which makes the product easy to remember. I often see them on YouTube, and I’m more likely to watch them if they tell an interesting story.

语法

22: Article errors

× Of course this thing is cosmetic to be honest I'm not interested in any cosmetic but last year I saw a advertisement, it was very interesting. So I'm fascinating about advertisement.

✓ Of course, this is a cosmetic product. To be honest, I'm not interested in cosmetics, but last year I saw an advertisement, and it was very interesting. So I was fascinated by the advertisement.

Use an before advertisement because it begins with a vowel sound. Cosmetics is the natural plural form when referring generally to cosmetic products. Fascinated describes how the speaker felt; fascinating describes something that causes interest.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Of course this thing is cosmetic to be honest I'm not interested in any cosmetic but last year I saw a advertisement, it was very interesting. So I'm fascinating about advertisement.

✓ Of course, this is a cosmetic product. To be honest, I'm not interested in cosmetics, but last year I saw an advertisement, and it was very interesting. So I was fascinated by the advertisement.

Cosmetics and advertisements are general references here, so plural forms are more appropriate than the singular forms cosmetic and advertisement.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Of course this thing is cosmetic to be honest I'm not interested in any cosmetic but last year I saw a advertisement, it was very interesting. So I'm fascinating about advertisement.

✓ Of course, this is a cosmetic product. To be honest, I'm not interested in cosmetics, but last year I saw an advertisement, and it was very interesting. So I was fascinated by the advertisement.

Use fascinated to describe the speaker's feeling. Fascinating describes the thing that causes the feeling.

5: Past tense issue

× Of course this thing is cosmetic to be honest I'm not interested in any cosmetic but last year I saw a advertisement, it was very interesting. So I'm fascinating about advertisement.

✓ Of course, this is a cosmetic product. To be honest, I'm not interested in cosmetics, but last year I saw an advertisement, and it was very interesting. So I was fascinated by the advertisement.

The speaker is describing a reaction to an advertisement seen last year, so the past form was fascinated fits the past-time context.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Of course this thing is cosmetic to be honest I'm not interested in any cosmetic but last year I saw a advertisement, it was very interesting. So I'm fascinating about advertisement.

✓ Of course, this is a cosmetic product. To be honest, I'm not interested in cosmetics, but last year I saw an advertisement, and it was very interesting. So I was fascinated by the advertisement.

The adjective fascinated is normally followed by by when naming what caused the feeling: fascinated by the advertisement.

5: Past tense issue

× I usually sold the advertised by using my phone because I usually I usually enjoy watching YouTube When I watch YouTube, I usually watch the many advertises because YouTube provides many advertises.

✓ I usually see advertisements on my phone because I enjoy watching YouTube. When I watch YouTube, I usually see many advertisements because YouTube provides many advertisements.

The answer describes a usual present-day activity, so use the present-tense verb see rather than sold. Sold is a past-tense form and does not express this repeated activity.

1: Singular and plural issue

✓ I usually see advertisements on my phone because I enjoy watching YouTube. When I watch YouTube, I usually see many advertisements because YouTube provides many advertisements.

The plural noun is advertisements, not advertises. Use advertisements after many because many takes a plural countable noun.

22: Article errors

✓ I usually see advertisements on my phone because I enjoy watching YouTube. When I watch YouTube, I usually see many advertisements because YouTube provides many advertisements.

Do not use the before many in this sentence. Many advertisements is the correct noun phrase.

22: Article errors

× Of course, although when I was childhood, the country of advertisement is very impression for me because I enjoyed I really liked many snacks when I was childhood so one time I saw the country advertisement but at

✓ Of course. When I was a child, the country's advertisement made a strong impression on me because I really liked snacks. One time, I saw the country's advertisement, but...

Use a before the singular countable noun child. The phrase when I was childhood is not grammatical; say when I was a child. The final ellipsis shows that the answer is incomplete in the transcript.

5: Past tense issue

✓ Of course. When I was a child, the country's advertisement made a strong impression on me because I really liked snacks. One time, I saw the country's advertisement, but...

The speaker is talking about childhood, a past period, so use past-tense wording such as made rather than is.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

✓ Of course. When I was a child, the country's advertisement made a strong impression on me because I really liked snacks. One time, I saw the country's advertisement, but...

Impression is a noun, so it cannot describe the advertisement after is in this construction. The correction uses made a strong impression, which is a grammatical expression for something affecting someone.

26: Sentence structure errors

✓ Of course. When I was a child, the country's advertisement made a strong impression on me because I really liked snacks. One time, I saw the country's advertisement, but...

The original repeats and combines clauses in a way that makes the sentence difficult to follow. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and remove the duplicated phrase I enjoyed I really liked.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× When I take the subway, I usually see many a lot of advertisements. I think when I usually use the five line, there are many advertises in five line. I think it is a great way to

✓ When I take the subway, I usually see a lot of advertisements. I think that when I use Line 5, there are many advertisements on the line. I think it is a great way to advertise.

Many and a lot of should not be used together to quantify the same noun. Use either many advertisements or a lot of advertisements.

1: Singular and plural issue

× When I take the subway, I usually see many a lot of advertisements. I think when I usually use the five line, there are many advertises in five line. I think it is a great way to

✓ When I take the subway, I usually see a lot of advertisements. I think that when I use Line 5, there are many advertisements on the line. I think it is a great way to advertise.

The plural form of advertisement is advertisements, not advertises. Use the plural form after many.

26: Sentence structure errors

× When I take the subway, I usually see many a lot of advertisements. I think when I usually use the five line, there are many advertises in five line. I think it is a great way to

✓ When I take the subway, I usually see a lot of advertisements. I think that when I use Line 5, there are many advertisements on the line. I think it is a great way to advertise.

The final phrase it is a great way to is incomplete because the infinitive needs a verb or an action to complete the idea. The correction adds advertise to make it a complete thought.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Of course, I like the advertisement. I think advertisement are great way to provide many information and then advertisement help me when I when I buy some product. So it is that's why advertisement