广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 直接回答“Yes, I have”，并说明具体买过什么、广告为什么影响你。注意使用正确结构：过去经历用“bought”，而不是“will choose”；“convenient for me to bought”应改为“convenient for me to buy”。避免“when I started to talk”等无法表达清楚意思的内容。

示例: Yes, I have. I once bought a jacket after seeing it in an online advertisement. The ad showed how stylish and comfortable it was, so I decided to buy it because shopping online was convenient.

建议: 先明确回答“Yes, quite often”，然后说明广告出现的场景，例如观看视频或使用社交媒体。注意“see advertisements”而不是“say advertisement”，“when I’m on my phone”而不是“when I on my phone”；表达频率时要保持一般现在时。最后补充广告带来的影响，如打断观看或帮助发现产品。

示例: Yes, quite often. I usually see advertisements when I watch videos or use social media on my phone. They can be useful because I sometimes discover new products, but they are also annoying when they interrupt a video.

建议: 需要先明确说出一个具体广告，例如零食或玩具广告，再描述它为什么令人印象深刻。原答案中的“ A where was charred”和“junk advertisement”意思不清，影响连贯性；可以使用“funny characters”“catchy slogan”等具体词汇。按照“广告是什么—小时候为什么喜欢—结果如何”的顺序组织答案。

示例: Yes. When I was a child, I remember a funny advertisement for a chocolate bar. It featured colourful characters and had a catchy slogan that I could easily remember. I liked it so much that I asked my parents to buy the chocolate for me.

建议: 直接回答是否经常看到，并准确描述广告出现的位置，例如地铁车厢、车站海报或公交车外部。原答案中“fans was by advocating on trees”和“see a collapse”表达不清，应该避免猜测式表达。可以举偶像演唱会广告的例子，并说明你为什么会注意它。

示例: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, when a famous singer is holding a concert, I often see posters inside trains and at subway stations. These advertisements usually attract my attention because they use bright colours and pictures of the singer.

建议: 回答“不喜欢”后，应给出一个清晰、具体的理由，例如广告太多、打断视频或浪费时间。“I don't want to become”不能表达“不喜欢广告”，应改为“I don’t really like them”。注意一般现在时：用“there are”描述现在的广告数量，并用“because”连接原因。

示例: No, I don’t really like advertisements. There are too many of them on some apps, and they often interrupt the videos I want to watch. As a result, I feel impatient and sometimes stop using the app.

建议: 需要明确说出喜欢的广告类型，例如明星代言的服装或演唱会广告。原答案的“the idols of the world heightened”含义不清，可以改为“advertisements featuring my favourite celebrities”。然后说明广告展示了哪些信息，以及它如何帮助你购物；避免反复使用“convenient”和“favorite thing”。

示例: I like advertisements featuring my favourite celebrities, especially clothing and concert advertisements. They usually show the products in an attractive way and give me useful information about new styles. If I like something, I can search for it online and decide whether to buy it.

× Yes I can when I started to talk there are so many at what I meant about it, so I will choose my favorite clothes on it.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was younger, there were many advertisements, so I chose my favorite clothes because of them.

问题：回答“Have you ever...?”时，应使用现在完成时“Yes, I have”，而不是“Yes, I can”。描述过去的经历时，应使用过去时“was”和“chose”。建议：讲述过去发生的事情时，统一使用过去时；回答现在完成时的问题时，可直接使用“Yes, I have.”

× Yes I can when I started to talk there are so many at what I meant about it, so I will choose my favorite clothes on it.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was younger, there were many advertisements, so I chose my favorite clothes because of them.

问题：过去有很多广告，应使用过去时“There were”，不能使用现在时“There are”。另外，“there were”后面要接复数名词“advertisements”。建议：根据时间选择“There is/are”或“There was/were”。

× I think it's convenient for me to bought my favorite clothes.

✓ I think it's convenient for me to buy my favorite clothes.

问题：不定式“to”后面必须使用动词原形，因此应说“to buy”，不能说“to bought”。建议：记住“to + 动词原形”，例如“to buy”“to watch”“to choose”。

× Yes I can when I started to talk there are so many at what I meant about it, so I will choose my favorite clothes on it.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was younger, there were many advertisements, so I chose my favorite clothes because of them.

问题：“choose my favorite clothes on it”中的介词“on”使用不正确。这里想表达“因为广告而选择衣服”，应使用“because of them”。建议：表示原因时使用“because of + 名词或代词”。

× Yes, I often say advertisement when I on my phone because when I watch the videos sometimes there was advertisement to wear on it.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone because there are sometimes advertisements when I watch videos.

问题：“when I on my phone”缺少动词，应改为“when I am on my phone”。描述经常发生的事情要使用一般现在时，所以“there was”应改为“there are”。建议：一般现在时中，主语“I”后面也需要完整的谓语，如“I am”或“I see”。

× Yes, I often say advertisement when I on my phone because when I watch the videos sometimes there was advertisement to wear on it.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone because there are sometimes advertisements when I watch videos.

问题：“advertisements”是复数，因此要使用“There are”，不能使用“There was”。建议：单数使用“There is/was”，复数使用“There are/were”。

× Yes, I often say advertisement when I on my phone because when I watch the videos sometimes there was advertisement to wear on it.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone because there are sometimes advertisements when I watch videos.

问题：泛指广告时，通常使用复数“advertisements”，不需要单数冠词；如果使用单数，应说“an advertisement”。建议：泛指一类事物时可用复数，如“advertisements”；表示一个具体事物时使用“a/an”。

× I can say it very convenient.

✓ I can say that it is very convenient.

问题：“convenient”是形容词，不能直接放在“it”后面作谓语，需要使用系动词“is”。建议：使用“主语 + be动词 + 形容词”的结构，例如“It is convenient.”

× A where was charred.

✓ An advertisement that made an impression on me was a junk-food advertisement.

问题：原句缺少清晰的主句结构，不能表达完整意思。修改后使用“An advertisement that made an impression on me was...”结构，使主语、定语从句和谓语完整。建议：表达“对我留下印象的广告是……”时，可以使用“This advertisement made an impression on me”或“The advertisement that impressed me was...”。

× I made an impression on the junk advertisement.

✓ A junk-food advertisement made an impression on me.

问题：“make an impression on”表示“给某人留下印象”，应该让广告作主语、人物作“on”后的宾语。原句的主客关系颠倒了。建议：使用固定搭配“A made an impression on B”，例如“The advertisement made an impression on me.”

× Advertisement is so for me they can speak very funny sentence.

✓ The advertisement was memorable to me because it used very funny sentences.

问题：题目询问童年时的广告，因此描述过去经历时应使用过去时“was”和“used”。建议：讲述童年经历时，注意将现在时改为过去时。

× Advertisement is so for me they can speak very funny sentence.

✓ The advertisement was memorable to me because it used very funny sentences.

问题：谈论一个具体的广告时，应在“advertisement”前使用定冠词“The”。“sentence”是可数名词，且这里是复数概念，应使用“sentences”。建议：具体名词前使用“the”，可数名词要注意单复数和冠词。

× I love it, I want to buy it.

✓ I love it, and I want to buy it.

问题：两个完整句子不能只用逗号连接，需要加入连词“and”，或拆成两个句子。建议：连接两个相关的完整句子时，可以使用“and”“but”或“so”。

× Yes I have uh sometimes if the idols will have a concert in the city their fans was by advocating on trees, I will always see a collapse of the so interesting for me to watch it.

✓ Yes, I have. Sometimes, if idols have a concert in the city, their fans put advertisements on trees, so I always see a collection of them. They are very interesting to watch.

问题：在由“if”引导的条件从句中，通常使用一般现在时表示将来条件，因此应说“if idols have”，而不是“if idols will have”。建议：使用“If + 一般现在时，主句 + will + 动词原形”，例如“If they have a concert, their fans will put up advertisements.”

× Yes I have uh sometimes if the idols will have a concert in the city their fans was by advocating on trees, I will always see a collapse of the so interesting for me to watch it.

✓ Yes, I have. Sometimes, if idols have a concert in the city, their fans put advertisements on trees, so I always see a collection of them. They are very interesting to watch.

问题：“their fans was by advocating”不是正确的被动语态结构，而且主语“fans”是复数，不能使用“was”。这里想表达粉丝张贴广告，主动语态“their fans put advertisements”更合适。建议：只有在强调动作承受者时使用被动语态；表达谁做了什么时优先使用主动语态。

× Yes I have uh sometimes if the idols will have a concert in the city their fans was by advocating on trees, I will always see a collapse of the so interesting for me to watch it.

✓ Yes, I have. Sometimes, if idols have a concert in the city, their fans put advertisements on trees, so I always see a collection of them. They are very interesting to watch.

问题：“fans”是复数，谓语不能使用单数形式“was”。另外，多个广告应使用复数代词“them”，不能使用单数“it”。建议：复数主语搭配复数谓语，并保持名词和代词的单复数一致。

× No, I don't want to become.

✓ No, I don't like them.

问题：题目问“Do you like advertisements?”，回答应使用“like”的一般现在时。原句“don't want to become”表达的是“不想成为”，意思和问题不一致。建议：回答一般现在时的问题时，尽量重复题目中的核心动词，如“Yes, I do”或“No, I don't like them.”

× Sometimes I will use these apps. There are so many advertisements, there was my time and I don't have good feeling to use apps that make me bad.

✓ Sometimes, when I use these apps, there are so many advertisements. They waste my time, and I don't feel good when I use apps that make me feel bad.

问题：描述经常发生的情况时，应使用一般现在时“when I use”，不能使用“will use”。“there was my time”不是正确的“There be”结构，应改为“They waste my time”。建议：使用“There are + 复数名词”表示“有很多……”，并使用完整的主语和谓语表达意思。

× Sometimes I will use these apps. There are so many advertisements, there was my time and I don't have good feeling to use apps that make me bad.

✓ Sometimes, when I use these apps, there are so many advertisements. They waste my time, and I don't feel good when I use apps that make me feel bad.

问题：“there was my time”以及“make me bad”没有形成自然、完整的英语表达。修改后使用“They waste my time”和“make me feel bad”，句子结构更加完整。建议：每个分句都要有清晰的主语和谓语，避免把中文表达直接翻译成英语。

× There are so many advertisements, there was my time and I don't have good feeling to use apps that make me bad.

✓ There are so many advertisements. They waste my time, and I don't feel good when I use apps that make me feel bad.

问题：“good feeling”前缺少限定词，而且这里更自然的表达是“I don't feel good”。建议：表达感受时使用“I feel + 形容词”，如“I feel happy”或“I don't feel good”。

× I like the idols of the world heightened because it's convenient for me to see it.

✓ I like advertisements featuring idols because they are convenient for me to watch.

问题：“convenient for me to see it”中的代词和表达不自然；观看广告通常使用动词“watch”，而不是“see”。修改后用“convenient for me to watch”表达“方便我观看”。建议：观看视频、广告或节目时，优先使用“watch”。

× I like the idols of the world heightened because it's convenient for me to see it.

✓ I like advertisements featuring idols because they are convenient for me to watch.

问题：前面的主语是复数“advertisements”，因此后面应使用复数代词“they”，不能使用单数“it”。建议：代词要与先行词在单复数上保持一致。

× It can show the things very popular and beautiful.

✓ They can show me things that are very popular and beautiful.

问题：“popular”和“beautiful”需要修饰“things”，应放在定语从句中，并使用系动词“are”。另外，前文的“advertisements”是复数，所以使用“They”。建议：形容词作表语时要搭配“be动词”，如“things that are popular”。

× I can check my favorite thing to buy and make me feel happy and remember.

✓ I can check out my favorite things to buy, and the advertisements make me feel happy and help me remember them.

问题：“make me feel happy and remember”缺少清晰的主语和宾语，且“thing”与多个喜欢的物品不一致。修改后使用“the advertisements”作主语，并用“them”指代这些物品或广告内容。建议：使用代词时，明确它所指代的名词，并确保单复数一致。