广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，表达清楚，也给出了态度，但“when I use my phone and computer”略显重复，可以说“when I use my phone or computer”。另外，“They are so annoying, I hate them”语气较绝对，建议补充具体场景和原因，并使用“especially”或“because”等连接词，使答案更自然、更有细节。

示例: Yes, I see advertisements quite often when I use my phone or computer, especially on social media and video-streaming apps. Most of them are annoying because they interrupt what I am watching, although some are useful when I am looking for a particular product.

建议: 答案中有多处语法和词汇问题，例如“still is a from my childhood”和“a cut on one”意思不清，影响理解；“it's grabbed my attention”应改为过去时“it grabbed my attention”。建议明确说明广告是什么、在哪里看到、为什么印象深刻，并使用完整句子。

示例: Yes, I remember a funny snack commercial from my childhood. It showed a group of children sharing the snack and making silly faces. I found it memorable because the story was simple, the music was catchy, and it made me laugh.

建议: 主要观点基本清楚，但“lots of ideas”应改为“lots of advertisements”，“They may be is poster and screen”应改为“They are usually posters or digital screens”。此外，题目问的是交通工具和其他交通场所，可以同时提到地铁车厢、车站或公交车，并补充广告内容。

示例: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport, particularly in subway stations and on buses. The advertisements are usually posters or digital screens promoting shopping malls, restaurants, or mobile apps. They are hard to miss because they are placed near the entrances and ticket machines.

建议: “Not raining”应为“No, not really”，“Disrupt me”应改为“They disrupt me”或“They interrupt what I am doing”。回答过于简短，并且重复表达讨厌，建议先直接回答，再说明广告如何打扰你，同时可以加入让步观点，例如有些广告也可能提供有用信息。

示例: No, not really. I find most advertisements boring and annoying, especially when they interrupt a video or appear repeatedly on my phone. However, I do appreciate advertisements that are short, informative, and relevant to my interests.

建议: “advertise”是动词，这里应使用名词“advertisements”；“fending”意思不清，可能想表达“吸引人”或“有趣”。建议使用“creative, entertaining, and memorable”等准确形容词，并具体说明喜欢这类广告的原因和例子。

示例: I like advertisements that are creative, entertaining, and not too intrusive. For example, a short advertisement with a clever story or attractive visual effects can make me remember the brand. I also prefer ads that give useful information instead of simply repeating the same message.

建议: “Not raining”应改为“No, not really”，“an ice ads”表达不清，可能应为“an advertisement”；“I seldom bought”应改为一般现在时“I seldom buy”，因为你是在描述习惯。建议回答中承认广告有时会影响你的选择，并解释你通常根据需求、质量和价格购买。

示例: No, not very often. I usually buy things because I need them, rather than simply because I have seen an advertisement. However, an advertisement may introduce a new product to me, and I might consider buying it if the price and quality seem reasonable.

× They are so annoying, I hate them.

✓ They are so annoying, so I hate them.

原句用逗号连接两个完整句子，句子结构不完整。可以使用连词“so”连接两个句子，也可以将其改为两个独立句子。

× Yeah, still is a from my childhood.

✓ Yeah, there is still one from my childhood.

表示“有一个”时，需要使用“There is”结构。原句缺少“There”，并且“a”后面不能直接接“from”；这里用“one”代替前面提到的广告。

× They may be is poster and screen.

✓ They may be posters and screens.

情态动词“may”后面要接动词原形，因此不能使用“is”。正确结构是“may be”。

× They may be is poster and screen.

✓ They may be posters and screens.

主语“They”表示复数，因此后面的表语也应使用复数形式：“posters”和“screens”。

× They may be is poster and screen.

✓ They may be a poster and a screen.

如果表达“一个海报和一个屏幕”，两个可数名词前都需要使用不定冠词“a”。若强调复数，则应改为“posters and screens”。

× Not raining, I think it's very boring and annoying.

✓ Not really. I think they are very boring and annoying.

“Not raining”表示“没有下雨”，不符合问题的语境。回答“不喜欢”时应使用副词短语“Not really”。此外，“advertisements”是复数，所以应使用“they are”，而不是“it’s”。

× Disrupt me.

✓ They disrupt me.

原句缺少主语，不能清楚说明“什么”打扰了说话者。补充主语“They”后，句子结构完整。

× Maybe the interesting and creative advertise they are fending and they will not annoy me, even makes me amused.

✓ Maybe interesting and creative advertisements will not annoy me; they may even amuse me.

“advertise”是动词，表示广告时应使用名词“advertisement”；这里谈论的是一类广告，因此使用复数“advertisements”。同时，“they”指复数广告，后面的动词也应保持复数一致。

× Maybe the interesting and creative advertise they are fending and they will not annoy me, even makes me amused.

✓ Maybe interesting and creative advertisements will not annoy me; they may even amuse me.

原句把多个意思不清楚地连接在一起，缺少清晰的句子结构。可以先说明“有趣且有创意的广告不会让我烦”，再用分号连接第二个完整分句。

× Maybe the interesting and creative advertise they are fending and they will not annoy me, even makes me amused.

✓ Maybe interesting and creative advertisements will not annoy me; they may even amuse me.

“they”是复数主语，不能与第三人称单数形式“makes”搭配。改为“may even amuse me”后，情态动词“may”后接动词原形“amuse”。

× I seldom bought something because of an ice ads.

✓ I seldom buy something because of an advertisement.

问题询问一般情况下的购买习惯，因此应使用一般现在时“buy”，而不是过去式“bought”。

× I seldom bought something because of an ice ads.

✓ I seldom buy something because of an advertisement.

“an”只能修饰单数可数名词，不能与复数形式“ads”连用。这里可改为单数“an advertisement”；如果使用复数，则应说“because of advertisements”。