广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

示例: Yes, I see advertisements on my phone and computer very often. For example, when I scroll social media or watch YouTube videos, ads appear between content, which I find tiring because they interrupt what I'm doing.

建议: Answer directly and give one specific reason why the ad impressed you. Use correct tense and avoid unnecessary words like 'Sir'.

示例: Yes. A Coca-Cola commercial impressed me as a child because the drink was not available in my country at the time. As a result, the colourful images and catchy music made it seem exciting and exotic to me.

建议: Be consistent and clear: state whether you see many ads, then explain with a specific example. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement) and use linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport, especially on buses and trains. However, I find these ads annoying because they clutter the space, so I usually look away or put on headphones to avoid them.

建议: Give a clear opinion and support it with one or two concise reasons. Eliminate fillers (uh, um) and vague phrases. Use precise vocabulary to explain why you dislike ads.

示例: No, I don't like advertisements because they often feel intrusive and push me to buy things I don't need. In addition, some ads use exaggerated claims, which makes them less trustworthy.

建议: State the category you prefer and give a specific reason or brief example. Avoid hesitations and repeat vocabulary accurately (e.g., 'beauty product adverts').

示例: I prefer advertisements for beauty products because I enjoy trying new makeup. For instance, a lipstick ad that shows real before-and-after results would catch my attention and help me decide whether to buy it.

建议: Answer directly with a brief example of a purchase and explain why the ad influenced you. Use clear reasoning and avoid vague statements.

示例: Yes, I have. I once bought a pair of headphones after watching a convincing online ad that highlighted the sound quality and battery life. The demonstration and customer reviews in the ad convinced me to try them.

× Yes, I often see advertisement when I am on my phone or computer because in our life when you scrolling on the phone or computer or listen something on the YouTube, you may stop and you have to listen some advertisement.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone or computer because in our life when you are scrolling on the phone or computer or listening to something on YouTube, you may stop and you have to listen to some advertisements.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural ('advertisements') to match the general statement. Verbal forms are missing auxiliary verbs: 'you scrolling' should be 'you are scrolling'. 'listen something' requires the preposition 'to' and the verb form 'listening'. Also 'on the YouTube' should be 'on YouTube'. These changes correct number agreement, verb form, and preposition use. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general counts, include appropriate auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses, and use 'listen to' for the verb 'listen'.

× Yes Sir, it was very fascinating when I first saw the advertisement on Coca-Cola because Coca-Cola is was not sold in my country.

✓ Yes Sir, it was very fascinating when I first saw the Coca-Cola advertisement because Coca-Cola was not sold in my country.

The phrase 'is was not sold' mixes present and past; only past tense 'was not sold' is appropriate since the speaker refers to a past situation. Also 'the advertisement on Coca-Cola' is better as 'the Coca-Cola advertisement' for natural word order. Suggestion: Use a single consistent tense for past events and place modifiers before nouns for clarity.

× So for me it was a very new thing and also the advertisement.

✓ So for me it was a very new thing and also a new advertisement.

The original repeats 'the advertisement' awkwardly and lacks an article. Adding 'a' and 'new' clarifies meaning and matches singular noun usage. Suggestion: Use appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') with singular countable nouns and avoid awkward repetition.

× No, I don't like to see advertisement on trains.

✓ No, I don't like to see advertisements on trains.

'Advertisement' should be plural ('advertisements') when speaking generally about many instances. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to multiple or general occurrences.

× On other transport I saw everywhere also in the training the coach.

✓ I see advertisements on other forms of transport everywhere, even in trains and coaches.

The original sentence has awkward word order and incorrect word choice ('training' should be 'trains'). Reordering the sentence and using correct nouns ('trains and coaches') fixes clarity and grammar. Suggestion: Keep subject-verb-object order and use correct nouns for vehicle types.

× But for me it's a very annoying and I try to avoid it.

✓ But for me they are very annoying and I try to avoid them.

'Advertisement' refers to plural instances here, so pronouns and verbs must agree: use 'they are' and 'them' to refer to 'advertisements'. 'A very annoying' is ungrammatical for plural. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree in number with the antecedent.

× MMM, Oh, no, honestly, I don't like advertisement uh, because I think, uh, advertisement, uh, is a good way to sell someone's products.

✓ Mm, no, honestly, I don't like advertisements because I think advertisements are a good way to sell someone's products.

Use plural 'advertisements' for general statements and match the verb 'are' for plural subjects. Also remove filler sounds for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and matching verbs for generalizations.

× Maybe it is not uh, quite good for you, uh, but uh, you uh, have to under improve.

✓ Maybe it is not quite good for you, but you have to improve.

'Under improve' is not correct English; the speaker likely means 'improve' or 'work on improving'. Remove filler 'uh's and use 'improve' as a verb. No reflexive pronoun needed here. Suggestion: Use 'improve' or 'work on improving' and avoid nonstandard collocations like 'under improve'.

× MMM Especially I like advertise advertising go for beauty products because I uh, like uh, making makeup products And for me it's very interesting, uh, because uh, uh, sometimes may uh, I find something good for me.

✓ Especially, I like advertisements for beauty products because I like making up and for me it's very interesting because sometimes I find something good for me.

Many issues: 'advertise advertising go' is ungrammatical; use 'advertisements for beauty products'. 'Making makeup products' should be 'doing makeup' or 'putting on makeup' depending on meaning. Remove filler words and correct word order. Suggestion: Use 'advertisements for [product]' and idiomatic expressions like 'putting on makeup' or 'doing makeup'.

× Yes of course, uh like uh, everyone, I also bought something because of an advertisement and it's very natural uh, because when you uh see advertisements, you are under impression and they think it's uh uh, quite different and something uh in high quality, but sometimes it's.

✓ Yes, of course, like everyone, I have also bought something because of an advertisement and it's very natural, because when you see advertisements, you are under their impression and you think it's something different and of high quality, but sometimes it's not.

Use present perfect 'have bought' for unspecified past experiences relevant to present. 'You are under impression' needs possessive 'under their impression' or better 'you are impressed'. 'They think' is unclear; 'you think' matches subject. Add 'of' before 'high quality' and finish with 'but sometimes it's not.' Suggestion: Use present perfect for life experiences, use 'be impressed' or 'be under the impression', and ensure sentence completion.