广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 注意语法和时态（例如“watching”应为“watch”或“I am watching”），避免重复表达，回答要更自然简练。可先给主题句，然后用一到两句具体说明并用连接词衔接。

示例: Yes, I see a lot of ads online. They often interrupt videos and make me feel annoyed, so I usually skip them when I can.

建议: 注意名词单复数和冠词（a advertisement -> an advertisement），清楚说明细节并使用连词解释为什么印象深刻；如果提到人物名字要拼写正确或解释其身份。

示例: Yes, I remember an advertisement for throat lozenges that featured a famous singer. It stayed with me because the singer's catchy jingle made the product easy to remember.

建议: 避免重复用词（例如两次‘I always see’），注意名词形式（poster -> posters）和介词搭配（posted at stations），用一到两句具体说明位置或类型并用连接词衔接。

示例: Yes, I often notice many posters and digital screens at stations and on trains. Because they use bright colors and bold images, they are hard to miss.

建议: 改正动词形式（When I scrolling -> When I'm scrolling 或 When I scroll），表达要更连贯，使用连接词解释不同场景下的态度，并给出简短原因。

示例: It depends. When I'm scrolling on my phone I find ads irritating because they interrupt me, but I don't mind seeing posters on the street since they can be interesting or useful.

建议: 注意词汇正确性（postal advertisements 看起来不合适，应为 ‘restaurant’ or ‘dessert’ ads），避免重复（attractive / attract）。用更具体的例子并说明原因。

示例: I like food advertisements, especially for pizza and desserts, because their photos look appetizing and the descriptions make me want to try the food.

× When I watching a new video they always disrupt me and I feel very nervous and anxious.

✓ When I am watching a new video, they always disrupt me and I feel very nervous and anxious.

原句缺少適當的be動詞來形成現在進行時。英語中表示“當我正在做某事”要用現在進行時 (be + V-ing)。建議在watching前加上適當的be動詞（如am），並在句中加逗號分隔從句，使句子更自然。

× When I was a child, I saw a advertisement which is about throat pills.

✓ When I was a child, I saw an advertisement that was about throat pills.

原句中使用了不定冠詞a但後接以元音音素開頭的單詞advertisement，應使用an；另外which is about phrasing不夠自然，且描述為過去發生應使用過去式was。建議改為an advertisement that was about ...。

× I think it's very interesting because caca is a celebrity.

✓ I think it was very interesting because Caca was a celebrity.

原句時態不一致：前句講過去經歷應用過去式；且人名首字母需大寫。若指的是當時廣告中Caca是名人，應用過去式was。建議一致使用過去時並正確大寫人名。

× I always see a variety of poster posted on stations and I always see them because they are very colorful.

✓ I always see a variety of posters posted at stations, and I always notice them because they are very colorful.

原句中的a variety of後面應接複數名詞（posters），station用法也應為at stations而非on stations；此外重複使用see顯得累贅，可用notice更自然。建議把poster改為複數並修正介詞。

× When I scrolling off my phones, I don't like advertisements.

✓ When I scroll through my phone, I don't like advertisements.

原句使用現在分詞scrolling不正確，應使用一般現在時scroll表示習慣性動作；短語scroll through my phone更常用，phone單數更自然。建議改為When I scroll through my phone。

× By contrast, if I go alone around the street, I may see some advertisement.

✓ By contrast, if I walk alone around the street, I may see some advertisements.

原句用go alone around the street不太自然，應用walk或go alone along the street；advertisement需為複數以匹配some。建議使用walk alone around/along the street並把advertisement改為複數。

× I prefer to see some food advertisements because they are very colorful and attractive for me.

✓ I prefer to see food advertisements because they are very colorful and attractive to me.

原句中some放在此處可去掉，另外固定搭配為attractive to someone而非attractive for someone。建議刪掉some並改為attractive to me。

× For example, some pizza and postal advertisements, they always attract me.

✓ For example, advertisements for pizza and postage always attract me.

原句中pizza and postal advertisements結構不清晰，postal通常作形容詞但與postage或delivery更搭配；另外使用兩個主語片語連接（..., they...）顯得冗餘，可合併為主句Advertisements for... always attract me。建議改為Advertisements for pizza and postage always attract me。