广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng thì phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ cảnh, âm nhạc, câu khẩu hiệu) và lý do tại sao quảng cáo để lại ấn tượng. Tránh nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng (uh, umm) để lưu loát hơn.

示例: A clear example answer: "Yes. One advertisement that impressed me as a child was a Kinder Joy commercial. It showed colorful animations and a catchy jingle that made the chocolate seem exciting. I remember the scene where the children opened the toy inside, which made me want to buy it. Because of that memorable melody and visuals, I still recall the ad today."

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng: nói có hoặc không, giải thích ngắn gọn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (loại quảng cáo, vị trí, nội dung). Hạn chế tiếng ngập ngừng và cấu trúc rối loạn; dùng liên từ để nối ý.

示例: A clear example answer: "Not really. I rarely see adverts on trains because I don't commute by public transport. However, I often notice large digital screens in shopping malls and bus stops that show promotional videos. These usually advertise new phones or food products, and they are quite eye-catching."

建议: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn: bắt đầu với câu chủ đề (I have mixed feelings), sau đó nêu hai lý do rõ ràng với liên từ (however, on the other hand). Cố gắng dùng từ vựng chính xác (annoying, helpful) và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

示例: A clear example answer: "I have mixed feelings about advertisements. On the one hand, long ads interrupt my favourite shows and can be very annoying. On the other hand, ads sometimes help me discover useful products or good sales. So I appreciate them when they are relevant but dislike them when they are intrusive."

建议: Câu trả lời mơ hồ và không cụ thể. Bạn nên nêu loại quảng cáo yêu thích (ví dụ: sáng tạo, hài hước, cảm động), giải thích tại sao với ví dụ cụ thể, và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g., "I'm really into" not "I really into").

示例: A clear example answer: "I'm really into creative and funny advertisements. For example, I enjoy ads that use clever storytelling or humour because they are memorable and make me smile. A recent favourite was a short film-style ad for a clothing brand that told a touching story in just thirty seconds."

建议: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần diễn đạt chính xác hơn: dùng giới từ và cấu trúc đúng (e.g., "I very often see ads when I use my phone, especially on TikTok or YouTube"). Nên mở rộng bằng cách nêu loại quảng cáo và lý do bạn thấy phiền (ví dụ: tần suất, độ dài, không phù hợp).

示例: A clear example answer: "Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially on platforms like TikTok and YouTube. Many ads are short but appear very frequently, which I find annoying. Sometimes ads are targeted to my interests, which can be useful, but overall the interruptions are frustrating."

× Oh, when I was a child there is a lot of advertisements that make me impression, but especially I remember seeing uh, advertisements related to Sarah Chocolate, yes, I mean chocolate, umm, from Kinder Joy.

✓ Oh, when I was a child there were a lot of advertisements that made an impression on me, but especially I remember seeing advertisements for Sarah Chocolate, I mean chocolate from Kinder Joy.

'There is' is incorrect for past time; use 'there were'. 'A lot of advertisements' requires plural agreement with 'were'. 'Make me impression' is ungrammatical; use 'made an impression on me' (past tense and correct collocation). Use 'advertisements for' rather than 'related to' for clarity.

× Umm actually I don't travel to work by transport or trans umm, but in my daily life they had a big UMM such as a big television public umm to umm promote many advertisements all related to umm some.

✓ Umm actually I don't travel to work by public transport, but in my daily life there are big screens, such as public televisions, that promote many advertisements.

Sentence tense and structure are inconsistent. 'I don't travel' is present, so use present 'there are' not past 'they had'. 'Transport or trans' should be 'public transport'. 'Big television public' should be reordered to 'public televisions' or 'big screens'. Use a relative clause 'that promote' for the adverts.

× MMM I have a mixed feeling about advertisements. For example, sometimes I watch of my favorite film and advertisements come is they come and make me feel annoying, but sometimes it's help me to uh search umm suitable product.

✓ I have mixed feelings about advertisements. For example, sometimes I am watching one of my favorite films and advertisements come on and make me feel annoyed, but sometimes they help me to find a suitable product.

'A mixed feeling' should be 'mixed feelings'. 'I watch of my favorite film' should be 'I am watching one of my favorite films' or 'I watch one of my favorite films'. 'Advertisements come is they come' is ungrammatical; use 'advertisements come on'. 'Make me feel annoying' should be 'make me feel annoyed' (wrong adjective/adverb). 'It's help me to search' should be 'they help me to find' (subject-verb agreement and correct verb collocation).

× I really into an advertisements that they attend, they, uh, they pay attention to invest it. For example, umm, I really into an advertisements about, uh, about Lori.

✓ I am really into advertisements that are well made and show attention to detail and investment. For example, I am really into advertisements about Lori.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for 'really into'. 'An advertisements' mixes article and plural; use 'advertisements' or 'an advertisement'. 'They attend' is wrong; intended meaning is 'that are well made' or 'that pay attention to detail'. 'Invest it' is unclear; rephrase as 'show attention to detail and investment'. Keep pronouns consistent.

× Yes, I very often see overtimes when I use my phone MMM such as when I I scored on Tiktok or YouTube. I see a lot of advertisements and honestly I feel annoyed.

✓ Yes, I very often see ads when I use my phone, for example when I scroll on TikTok or YouTube. I see a lot of advertisements and honestly I feel annoyed.

'See overtimes' is incorrect; perhaps meant 'see ads overtime' — correct phrase is 'see ads' or 'see advertisements'. 'When I I scored' should be 'when I scroll' (verb form and spelling). Use gerund 'scrolling' or present simple 'scroll' depending on context. Overall clarity and verb choice corrected.