广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời ngắn và quá chung chung; cần mở rộng bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi bổ sung một vài chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại quảng cáo, lý do không nhớ, hoặc một kỷ niệm mơ hồ). Tránh dùng cấu trúc phủ định đơn thuần và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc.

示例: I don't recall any specific advertisement from my childhood, probably because I rarely paid attention to TV commercials. However, I vaguely remember colourful cartoon ads for snacks that would catch my eye, especially during weekend cartoons.

建议: Câu trả lời có thông tin nhưng thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm ràng buộc (uh) và từ bị dùng sai (suits the rings). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu hỗ trợ với liên từ và mô tả cụ thể hơn (loại quảng cáo, ví dụ rõ ràng).

示例: Yes, I see many advertisements on buses and trains. For example, there are large posters for drinks like Coca-Cola and posters for clothing brands, which are placed near the doors where passengers can easily see them.

建议: Ý kiến rõ nhưng lặp từ và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề mạnh rồi giải thích nguyên nhân với từ vựng phù hợp, tránh lặp lại từ 'because' hai lần, và dùng danh từ/adj chính xác (boring → bored; advertisement → ads).

示例: I don't really like advertisements because I often find them repetitive and boring. They interrupt what I'm watching and the same ads play so frequently that they become annoying.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (I am really like → I really like; it very interesting → it's very interesting; knows news product → learn about new products). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do cụ thể và dẫn chứng, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

示例: I really like advertisements for games and soft drinks because they are usually colourful and entertaining. For instance, game ads often show exciting gameplay clips, which help me decide whether I want to try a new title.

建议: Trả lời trùng nội dung trước và lặp ý. Cần mở rộng bằng cách mô tả loại quảng cáo online (banners, pop-ups, pre-rolls), tần suất và ảnh hưởng đến bạn, dùng linking words để mạch lạc (e.g., however, for example).

示例: Yes, I do see a lot of ads on my phone and computer, especially pop-ups and video ads before online videos. They can be quite annoying because they interrupt my browsing, and I often see the same ones repeatedly.

× No, there isn't. I don't remember any specific advertisement from my childhood.

✓ No, there weren't any. I don't remember any specific advertisements from my childhood.

The examiner's question asks about advertisements in general in the past. The original reply used 'isn't' (present singular) which mismatches the past context. Use 'weren't any' for plural past existence and 'advertisements' plural to match 'any' and general meaning. Suggestion: use 'there were'/'there weren't' for existence in the past and make nouns plural when referring to unspecified multiple items.

× Yes I do. I often see a lot of advertising on uh, bus uh, they always advertise things suits the rings such as Coca-Cola and Steven.

✓ Yes, I do. I often see a lot of advertising on buses; they always advertise things such as Coca-Cola and snacks.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'bus' should be plural 'buses' to agree with 'a lot of advertising on' (general repeated observation). 'they always advertise things suits the rings' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'they always advertise things such as...' Use 'such as' before examples. Also 'Steven' seems incorrect as a product example; replace with a plausible noun like 'snacks' or another brand. Use semicolon or sentence break to separate clauses. Suggestion: use plural for transport names when speaking generally and use 'such as' for examples.

× No, I don't because I feel boring and annoyed because they often repeat advertisement.

✓ No, I don't, because I feel bored and annoyed; they often repeat advertisements.

Use the adjective 'bored' to describe a person's feeling, not 'boring' which describes something that causes boredom. Also 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally about repeated ads. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms (bored vs boring) and pluralize countable nouns when referring to them generally.

× I am really like games and soft drinks advertisement because it very interesting and it can help me knows news product.

✓ I really like advertisements for games and soft drinks because they are very interesting and they can help me learn about new products.

Several problems: 'I am really like' is wrong; correct is 'I really like'. 'advertisement' should be plural and use 'for' to indicate topic: 'advertisements for games and soft drinks'. 'it very interesting' needs subject-verb agreement and adjective: 'they are very interesting'. 'help me knows news product' has wrong verb forms and word choice: use 'help me learn about new products'. Suggestions: remove extra 'am', match plural subjects and verbs, use infinitive 'learn' after 'help', and pluralize nouns appropriately.

× No, I don't because I feel very boring and annoyed. Moreover, they always repeat advertisement.

✓ No, I don't, because I feel very bored and annoyed. Moreover, they always repeat advertisements.

Same issues as earlier: use 'bored' (feeling) not 'boring' (causing feeling). 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally. Also include commas for natural pauses. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and plural nouns for general statements.