自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也补充了自行车的来源，但冠词和表达有错误：应说“a bike”“when I was a child”和“an old-style bike”。“bad bike”通常表示自行车质量差；如果你想表达喜欢或印象深刻，可以换成更准确的形容词。建议用两句话简洁回答，并补充一个具体细节。

示例: Yes, I did. My dad gave me an old-fashioned bike for my birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建议: 回答没有清楚说明现在自行车是否受欢迎，而且最后一句“In actually in my family”不完整，建议删除或改成完整例子。语法上，“everyone”后应使用“went”（谈过去时）；“especially when I was young, which is 20 years ago”不自然，可改为“about 20 years ago”。先直接回答，再用具体原因或今昔对比展开，并确保句子完整。

示例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. About 20 years ago, many people cycled to work, but today more people use cars or public transport.

× Yeah, I had bad bike when I was child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bad bike when I was a child.

“Bike”和“child”都是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词。这里分别用“a bad bike”和“a child”。

× It was a old style bike my dad bought me as a birthday gift.

✓ It was an old-style bike my dad bought me as a birthday gift.

“Old”以元音音素开头，所以前面应使用“an”，而不是“a”。

× Especially when I was young, which is 20 years ago, almost everyone go to work by bike or by bus.

✓ Especially when I was young, which was 20 years ago, almost everyone went to work by bike or by bus.

这句话描述的是二十年前的情况，因此动词应使用过去时：“is”改为“was”，“go”改为“went”。

× In actually in my family.

✓ Actually, in my family, ...

“Actually”前面不需要加介词“in”。原话在“in my family”后没有说完，因此只能先修正已明确的错误，不能补写未提供的内容。