自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but my cousin he has. He had the a bike and I was playing with the. Him.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because uh, currently, uh, just the children or, uh, young, uh, people use uh, uh, the bikes, but uh, the adults, uh, don't use it, so not popular.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 35.0建议: استخدم الماضي عند الحديث عن طفولتك: قل «I didn’t have» بدلًا من «I don’t have»، وتجنّب تكرار الفاعل مثل «my cousin he». أجب بوضوح، ثم أضف تفصيلًا قصيرًا يشرح كيف كنت تستخدم دراجة ابن عمك.
示例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but my cousin did. I used to ride his bike when we played together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 45.0建议: ابدأ بإجابة مباشرة، ثم وضّح الفكرة بتفصيل محدد. قل «bikes aren’t very popular» بدلًا من «so not popular»، واستخدم «them» للإشارة إلى الدراجات. قلّل الترددات مثل «uh» واستخدم رابطًا مثل «because» أو «whereas» لربط السبب بالمقارنة.
示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Children and teenagers often ride them for fun, whereas most adults prefer to travel by car or public transport.
语法
× I don't have a bike when I was a child
✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child
The sentence refers to childhood, a finished period in the past, so the past form didn't have is needed instead of don't have. Use the past tense consistently when describing past experiences.
× my cousin he has
✓ my cousin had one
The subject my cousin is already stated, so adding he repeats the subject unnecessarily. Use one to avoid repeating bike.
× my cousin he has
✓ my cousin had one
The answer describes a situation in the past, so has should be changed to had. Use the past tense for actions and possessions during a finished period.
× He had the a bike
✓ He had a bike
The sentence incorrectly uses two articles, the and a, before the same noun. Use only a before a singular countable noun when introducing it.
× I was playing with the. Him.
✓ I was playing with it.
A bike is an object, so use the pronoun it rather than him. Also, the article the cannot replace a pronoun in this context.
× the adults, uh, don't use it
✓ the adults don't use them
The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use them to agree with the plural noun.
× so not popular
✓ so bikes are not popular
This phrase has no finite verb, so it is not a complete sentence. Add the verb are and state the subject, bikes, to form a complete clause.
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