自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past tense for events from your childhood: say “I had” and “my father gave me.” Replace “at that time period” with “at the time,” and say “I still have it at home” rather than “since now I have that bike at my home.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was five. My father gave it to me as a gift, and it was very special to me. I still have it at home, so it brings back a lot of happy memories.

建议: Your answer is clear and includes relevant reasons. Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, since mentioning a license suggests motorbikes. Also, keep the tense consistent by saying “once they get a license” and avoid starting the final sentence with “And.”

示例: Yes, motorbikes are quite popular in my country. Many young people use them to get around after school because they are convenient and relatively affordable. Once they get a license, they can travel around town more easily.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was 5.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 5.

The sentence refers to a time in the past, indicated by when I was 5, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form have.

× At that time period my father gifted me a bike that is very close to my heart since now I have that bike at my home.

✓ At that time, my father gave me a bike that is very close to my heart because I still have it at home.

Since now does not correctly express the reason the bike is close to your heart. Use because to introduce the reason. At that time is also the natural expression here; time period is unnecessarily repetitive.

× And once they had a license, they can easily get around town without any problems.

✓ And once they have a license, they can easily get around town without any problems.

This sentence describes a general situation, so use the present-tense have. Keep the verb tense consistent with can.