自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充具体细节。减少“uh”等填充词；描述童年经历时使用过去时，例如“when I rode it, I felt…”，而不是“when I bicycling it”或“I always feel”。可以说明骑车带给你的感受，让回答更自然、完整。

示例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike for my sixth birthday, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood. It made me feel free and happy.

建议: 开头明确回答“自行车在中国很受欢迎”，不要使用意思不清楚的“famous sports”和“famous translate”。可以具体提到共享单车，以及它如何方便人们短途出行。注意主谓一致，并用连接词把原因和结果连起来。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. They are convenient for short trips, and people can easily pick one up near a subway station. As a result, cycling is a common way to get around.

× When I bicycling it

✓ When I rode it

【过去时错误】这段话是在回忆童年经历，因此这里应使用过去时。ride 的过去式是 rode。

× I always feel free and happy.

✓ I always felt free and happy.

【现在时错误】句子描述的是小时候骑车时的感受，应与过去的叙述保持时态一致，使用 felt，而不是 feel。

× It's a famous sports and famous translate in my country.

✓ It's a popular sport and a popular way to get around in my country.

【单复数问题】冠词 a 后面应接单数可数名词，因此 sports 应改为 sport。原句中的 translate 也不能在这里充当名词；改成 a popular way to get around 后，表达更符合英语语法。

× Bikes and sharing is so popular in China.

✓ Bikes and bike-sharing are very popular in China.

【主谓一致错误】主语由 bikes 和 bike-sharing 两部分组成，是复数概念，因此谓语应使用 are，而不是 is。表达“共享单车”时，可以使用 bike-sharing。

× It helps and people to go out conveniently.

✓ They help people get around conveniently.

【连词使用错误】and 不能放在 helps 和 people 之间；help 后面可以直接接宾语 people。前文的 bikes 和 bike-sharing 是复数，因此这里也用 they 和 help。