自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也给出了具体背景和原因。把“at the early 1980s”改为“in the early 1980s”；另外，“Unfortunately”带有遗憾的语气，如果并不想强调遗憾，可以直接说没有自行车。可补充一个简短细节，让回答更自然完整。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small village in southern China in the early 1980s, when bicycles were not very common among children.

建议: 回答开头表达了观点，但后面的句子语法和表达不清晰，影响理解。使用完整句说明现在人们骑自行车的情况，并用“for example”引出女儿的例子。注意说“nowadays”或“these days”，不要说“in nowadays”；“my daughter have”应改为“my daughter has”或“my daughter rides a bike”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in China. These days, you can see many people riding them on the streets, especially for short trips. My daughter has a bike, and she enjoys riding it in the park.

× I was born in a small village in South China at the early 1980s.

✓ I was born in a small village in South China in the early 1980s.

表示“在某个年代/时期”通常用介词 in，而不是 at。可以记住：in the 1980s、in the early 1980s。

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China in nowadays you can see a lot of people.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Nowadays, you can see a lot of people riding them.

nowadays 是副词，前面不需要加介词 in。可将它放在句首或句中，例如：Nowadays, many people ride bikes. 此处也补全了后半句，使表达完整。

× Right of riding bicycles on street also my daughter have.

✓ You can see a lot of people riding bicycles on the street, and my daughter has a bike too.

原句中的 Right of riding 不能构成通顺、完整的表达，后面的 also my daughter have 也缺少正确的句子结构。可将内容整理为两个并列分句：You can see...，and my daughter...。表达“我的女儿也有一辆自行车”时，可以说 my daughter has a bike too。

× Right of riding bicycles on street also my daughter have.

✓ You can see a lot of people riding bicycles on the street, and my daughter has a bike too.

street 是可数名词单数，通常需要冠词。这里可说 on the street。注意：如果泛指骑车这项活动，也可以说 riding bicycles on streets。

× also my daughter have

✓ My daughter has a bike too.

主语 my daughter 是第三人称单数，表示现在拥有时，动词 have 要变为 has。可以记住：I/you/we/they have；he/she/it has。