自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có ý bổ sung về mẹ mua xe cho mình, nhưng câu trả lời khó hiểu do dùng sai thì và từ: hãy dùng “had” cho quá khứ và “bought me a bike” thay vì “have a buy / was buy”. Diễn đạt rõ hoạt động bạn thường làm với xe, chẳng hạn “ride it with my friends”, và bỏ các từ đệm như “uh”.

示例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it with my friends after school.

建议: Bạn thể hiện quan điểm rõ bằng “Definitely”, nhưng phần giải thích chưa mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi khiến ý khó hiểu. Hãy dùng cấu trúc “Bikes are popular because…” và nêu một lý do cụ thể, ví dụ nhiều người dùng xe đạp để đi học. Chú ý phát âm và dùng đúng cụm “ride a bike”; tránh lặp ý và ngắt câu giữa cụm từ.

示例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because many students ride them to school. They’re also an affordable way to get around.

× Uh, of course I have a buy when I was a child.

✓ Uh, of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past form had rather than have. The word buy appears to be intended as bike; this is a word-choice correction, not a grammar-type issue.

× My mother was buy for me to uh. Go on with my friend and practice.

✓ My mother bought one for me so I could go riding with my friends and practice.

Use bought, the past form of buy, to describe what your mother did. Was buy is not the correct active past-tense form. Connect the purpose phrase to the main clause instead of starting a new sentence with the incomplete phrase Go on.

× Definitely, I believe that's by a popular in my country overall my everybody I know who's ill by. To go to school.

✓ Definitely, I believe bikes are popular in my country. Almost everybody I know rides a bike to school.

With the singular indefinite pronoun everybody, use a third-person singular verb: rides, not ride. The corrected version also expresses the apparent meaning of the answer more clearly.