自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Используйте прошедшее время, поскольку речь идёт о детстве: «I had», «I rode». После запятой не начинайте новое предложение с заглавной буквы. Избегайте повтора «I love, I really loved it»; лучше кратко объяснить, почему велосипед вам нравился. Ответьте прямо и добавьте одну конкретную деталь.

示例: Yes, I had a red-and-yellow bike when I was a child. I often rode it on the street with my parents, and I really enjoyed those rides.

建议: Согласуйте подлежащее и сказуемое: «bikes are» и «someone rides». Вместо неестественного «Always someone ride» скажите «You can always see people riding bikes». Начните с чёткого ответа, затем приведите конкретные примеры; для связности используйте, например, «for example».

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Ukraine, especially in Kyiv. You can often see people cycling on the streets, and some of my classmates ride bikes too.

× When I was a child, I have a bike, It was red and yellow.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike. It was red and yellow.

The sentence describes a past situation, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Use a period to separate the two complete sentences.

× I always ride a bike on the street with my parents.

✓ I always rode a bike on the street with my parents.

The answer describes a childhood habit, so the verb should be in the past tense. The past-tense form of ride is rode.

× Always someone ride a bike on the streets and my classmates do it too.

✓ Someone always rides a bike on the streets, and my classmates do it too.

Someone is a singular subject, so in the present simple the verb needs the third-person singular ending -s: rides.

× Always someone ride a bike on the streets and my classmates do it too.

✓ Someone always rides a bike on the streets, and my classmates do it too.

Always normally goes after the subject and before the main verb in this sentence. Place it after someone: Someone always rides.

× Yes, bikes is really popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country.

Bikes is a plural subject, so it needs the plural verb are, not the singular verb is.