自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了小时候骑车的地点，但“am big on riding”偏口语且与过去时间不一致，建议改为“was keen on riding bikes”。“It’s therapeutic for me”谈的是现在的感受，和童年经历衔接不够自然；可以说明骑车让你感到放松。删去句末的“Umm”，并用一个具体细节丰富答案即可。

示例: Yes, I did. I was quite keen on riding my bike when I was a child. I often rode around the lake near my home, and it was a relaxing way to spend time outdoors.

建议: 先直接回答“是的”，并将“bike”改为复数“bikes”或使用“cycling”。“add us muscle”表达不自然，可改为“builds muscle”或“helps people stay fit”；“I think is popular”缺少主语，应说“cycling is popular”。建议补充一个具体原因或场景，例如城市里的共享单车或日常通勤，并避免填充词。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Cycling is an affordable way to get around, and it also helps people stay fit. In many cities, people use shared bikes for short trips or to commute to work.

× bike can improve our health

✓ Bikes can improve our health.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应该使用复数形式“bikes”。也可以说“A bike can improve our health”，但不能在可数名词单数“bike”前不加冠词。

× I think is popular in China.

✓ I think they are popular in China.

“I think”后面的从句缺少主语。前文谈的是复数“bikes”，所以应补上主语“they”，并使用与复数主语搭配的“are”。