自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，因此应使用过去时（“Yes, I did”或“I had a bike”），避免现在时和过去时混用。描述父亲教你骑车时，用“taught”；描述骑车的感受时，用形容词“relaxing and entertaining”，并说明是骑车这件事让你感到放松、有趣。可以补充一个具体细节，例如练习的频率或当时的感受。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I used to practise riding it in a garden near my house. My father taught me how to ride, and I really enjoyed those relaxing afternoons.

建议: 问题询问的是现在自行车是否受欢迎，因此先明确说明目前的情况；如果想比较过去和现在，再用清晰的连接词（如“However”）引出变化。避免把“1990年代”直接接在“现在很受欢迎”后面造成时间矛盾；“transportation”通常不可数，表达交通方式时可说“means of transport”。删去重复、自我修正和填充词，并补充具体原因或例子，例如通勤、健身或环保。

示例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys and exercise. In the 1990s, many people relied on bicycles as their main means of transport. However, these days, more people use the underground and buses to get around.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题在于时态与问题中的时间不一致。考官问的是你小时候有没有自行车，因此应使用一般过去时“had”，而不是一般现在时“have”。

× My father teaches taught me how to ride it.

✓ My father taught me how to ride it.

“taught”是“teach”的一般过去时，符合叙述童年经历的语境。原句中的“teaches taught”是重复的自我修正，应保留正确的过去式“taught”。

× It's a very relaxing and entertaining.

✓ It's very relaxing and entertaining.

“relaxing”和“entertaining”在这里作表语形容词，前面不需要冠词“a”。如果要使用“a”，后面需要接名词，例如“It's a very relaxing and entertaining activity.”

× Bikes are very popular in my country, especially in 1990s.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country, especially in the 1990s.

表示“20世纪90年代”时，年代前通常要加定冠词“the”，所以应说“in the 1990s”。

× ...and which the when the transportations is are mainly using bikes...

✓ ...when people mainly used bikes for transportation...

原句中“and which the when”结构混乱；“transportation”是交通方式或运输这一概念，不能作为“使用自行车”的动作执行者。可用“people”作主语，并用“used”表达过去人们主要骑自行车出行。

× ...people are talking more about underground and uh bus.

✓ ...people are talking more about the underground and buses.

在英式英语中，表示地铁系统时通常说“the underground”；“bus”是可数名词，此处泛指多种公交车，应使用复数“buses”。