自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is direct, but the question asks about the past, so use the past tense “did” rather than “have.” Add a brief detail to make your response more natural and informative.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

建议: Your answer gives a reason, but several words and phrases are unclear, which makes your meaning difficult to follow. Use “ride a bike” instead of “red bike,” avoid repeating fillers, and clearly explain why cycling may be unpopular. Keep your answer to a few connected sentences.

示例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people feel that riding on busy roads is dangerous, and parents often worry about their children’s safety. As a result, people may prefer to travel by car or public transport.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the simple past tense, Did you have...? The response should use did to agree with that tense. Use Yes, I did, rather than Yes, I have.

× No, I don't think so, because in my country black is very uh, we cannot red bike in the road and the back, umm uh, our parents think the back is very dangerous.

✓ No, I don't think so. In my country, bikes are very [unclear]. We cannot ride bikes on the road, and our parents think bikes are very dangerous.

The phrase because in my country black is very is incomplete: very needs an adjective or a completed idea. Also, cannot must be followed by a base-form verb, such as ride. Avoid fillers when they make a sentence incomplete, and finish each idea clearly.

× No, I don't think so, because in my country black is very uh, we cannot red bike in the road and the back, umm uh, our parents think the back is very dangerous.

✓ No, I don't think so. In my country, bikes are very [unclear]. We cannot ride bikes on the road, and our parents think bikes are very dangerous.

Use on the road, not in the road, when referring to riding along a road's surface. Remember to choose prepositions according to the intended meaning.

× No, I don't think so, because in my country black is very uh, we cannot red bike in the road and the back, umm uh, our parents think the back is very dangerous.

✓ No, I don't think so. In my country, bikes are very [unclear]. We cannot ride bikes on the road, and our parents think bikes are very dangerous.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural form bikes. Alternatively, use a singular count noun with an article, as in ride a bike. The transcript's the back appears unclear, so this correction treats it as a reference to bikes.