自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer in the past tense: use “I had” rather than “I do have.” Pronounce and use “bike” instead of “bite,” and avoid repeating words. You can add one brief detail about the bike or how you used it.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: Give a clear answer to whether bikes are popular, using “popular” or “common” rather than “a bond.” Avoid repeating “because” and “in my country.” Use the plural forms “bikes” and “children,” and say “learn to ride.” Then support your answer with a specific reason.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among families. Parents often teach their children to ride when they are young, and cycling together is a fun way to spend time as a family.

× Yes, I do have a bite when I was a child that that my my father bought me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child that my father bought me.

The answer refers to a past period, indicated by when I was a child, so use the past-tense verb had instead of the present-tense do have. Bike is also the intended word here, not bite.

× From my perspective, I think bikes are a bond in my country because because people in my country use bike to strengthen the bond between their families and teach their child to read to ride a bike at a very young age.

✓ From my perspective, I think bikes are a bond in my country because people in my country use bikes to strengthen the bond between their families and teach their children to ride a bike at a very young age.

Use the plural count noun bikes after use when referring to bicycles in general. Since people refers to multiple individuals, children is the more appropriate plural form than their child. The repeated words are speech disfluencies rather than grammar errors.