自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接、表达基本自然。可以补充一条具体细节，例如你骑车的地点、频率或感受，让回答更充实；注意控制在五句话以内。

示例: Yes, my father bought me a bike when I was eight. I used to ride it in the park near my home, especially on weekends.

建议: 先直接回答问题，再用一两个细节说明原因或举例。避免重复说“my country”和“our city”；如果想提深圳，可以说“in cities like Shenzhen”。注意语法：用“most children”，并且此处用“have”，不要写成“have has”。

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in China, especially in cities like Shenzhen. Many children have bikes because they are a convenient way to get around and have fun outdoors.

× In my country, in our city, Shenzhen. Most of child have has a bicycle when they are young.

✓ In my country, especially in Shenzhen, most children have a bicycle when they are young.

“Most”后面直接接可数名词时，名词要用复数形式，因此应将“child”改为“children”。可以说“most children”，也可以说“most of the children”；不能说“most of child”。

× In my country, in our city, Shenzhen. Most of child have has a bicycle when they are young.

✓ In my country, especially in Shenzhen, most children have a bicycle when they are young.

主语“most children”是复数，因此谓语应使用“have”，不能使用“has”。原句中的“have has”也不能同时出现，应删去多余的动词形式。

× In my country, in our city, Shenzhen.

✓ In my country, especially in Shenzhen, most children have a bicycle when they are young.

“In my country, in our city, Shenzhen.”只是地点短语，没有谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。可以把它与后面的内容连起来，并补上完整的主语和谓语。