自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly first, then give one clear reason or detail. Avoid unrelated comments about having a good childhood. Correct the past-tense grammar: say “I didn’t have,” not “I didn’t had.” Use “ride a bike” and avoid repeating or listing unclear examples. Aim for fluent, specific language with minimal hesitation.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride one. I was a little nervous about losing my balance, so I usually walked or took public transport instead.

建议: Give a clear yes-or-no answer and support it with a specific, understandable reason. Clarify what you mean by “bike roads” (for example, bike lanes) and use accurate time expressions. Avoid the unclear phrase “it is unexpected what it would be”; explain whether cycling is popular in Kyiv and why. Use a linking word such as “although” to connect a contrast.

示例: Bikes are becoming more popular in Ukraine, although they are not used by everyone. In Kyiv, more bike lanes have been built in recent years, which makes cycling easier. However, heavy traffic and limited cycling infrastructure in some areas still discourage people from riding.

× I didn't had a bike because I didn't know how to ride it.

✓ I didn't have a bike because I didn't know how to ride it.

After did not (didn't), use the base form of the verb, have, not the past form had. When describing the student's childhood, use couldn't rather than can't in the following clause.

× I can't control when I'm on the some transport like Raleigh, Raleigh or skate or other.

✓ I couldn't control myself when I was on a bike, a skateboard, or another type of transport.

The sentence describes the student's experience as a child, so use the past forms couldn't and was. Keep the verb tenses consistent when talking about a past situation.

× I can't control when I'm on the some transport like Raleigh, Raleigh or skate or other.

✓ I couldn't control myself when I was on a bike, a skateboard, or another type of transport.

The is not used before some in this construction. Use another type of transport to express the intended meaning without the incorrect article.

× You know, in Ukraine we had bike roads maybe 4, two or three years.

✓ You know, in Ukraine, we have had bike lanes for maybe two or three years.

The speaker describes bike lanes that began to exist in the past and are still present now, so the present perfect, have had, is appropriate. Use for before a period of time.

× But according to the situation that is in my city in Kiev, it is unexpected what it would be.

✓ But given the situation in my city, Kyiv, it is not as popular as one might expect.

The original clause it is unexpected what it would be is not structured naturally in English. Use a clear comparison clause, not as popular as one might expect, to express that popularity is lower than expected.