自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense, then give one clear reason. Correct the phrases “when I were” to “when I was,” “write the bike” to “ride a bike,” and “did not allowed” to “did not allow.” Avoid the unclear phrase “because I am a girl and I could.”

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned how to ride one, and my parents didn’t allow me to cycle because they were worried about my safety.

建议: Give a clear answer and use the plural form “bikes.” Replace “specially” with “especially,” and explain who uses bikes and why. Finish your final sentence, remove fillers such as “uh,” and use a linking word like “because” to connect your reason.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. Many use them as a regular means of transport because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× I don't have a bike when I were a child because I am a girl and I could.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I am a girl and I could.

The question asks about childhood, so use the past form didn't have instead of don't have. With the subject I, the past form of be is was, not were. The present tense am can remain because being a girl may still be true now.

× I could.

✓ I could not ride one.

Could is a modal verb and needs a base-form verb to complete the idea. Add ride after could. The negative is suggested by the surrounding context about not knowing how to ride a bike.

× My parents did not allowed me to ride the bike.

✓ My parents did not allow me to ride the bike.

After did not, use the base form of the verb. Therefore, allowed should be allow.

× Yes, bike are so popular in my country. Local people, especially the Bo young boys, use bike as regular transport.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country. Local people, especially the Bo young boys, use bikes as regular transport.

The statement refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike. The plural form also agrees with are.

× They have their own bike.

✓ They have their own bikes.

They refers to more than one person, and the sentence describes the bikes owned by those people. Use the plural noun bikes.

× When they need to go anywhere they ride the.

✓ When they need to go anywhere, they ride their bikes.

The is a determiner and must be followed by a noun. The original sentence ends before the object is complete; add their bikes to complete the sentence.