自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp rằng mình không có xe đạp, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý chưa rõ. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ khi kể về tuổi thơ: “I didn’t have…”, nói rõ độ tuổi nếu nhớ, và giải thích cụ thể chiếc xe quá lớn nên bạn không thể sử dụng. Tránh lặp từ và dừng lại ở khoảng 2–3 câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My father bought me one when I was about eight, but it was an adult-sized bike, so it was too big for me to ride.

建议: Bạn nêu được quan điểm và bắt đầu đưa ra lý do, nhưng câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh, có lỗi ở “I haven’t think” và “biceps” (cần nói “bikes”). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc “I don’t think…”, rồi giải thích bằng cách so sánh xe đạp với ô tô hoặc phương tiện công cộng. Dùng một từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example” và kết thúc câu rõ ràng.

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people prefer cars or public transport because they are more convenient for commuting. However, bikes are still popular for exercise and short trips.

× No, I haven't had a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, so use the simple past did not have rather than the present perfect haven't had. The correction also adds a before child; this article issue is listed separately.

× No, I haven't had a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child. Singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

× I remember when I was years old, my father bought me a a bike.

✓ I remember that when I was [age] years old, my father bought me a bike.

The article a is repeated before bike, so remove the duplicate. The age is missing from the transcript; insert the intended number in its place.

× I I remember the vice was for adult.

✓ I remember the bike was for adults.

When referring generally to the category of people the bike was designed for, use the plural adults rather than the singular adult without an article. The repeated I is a speech disfluency, and vice appears to be a transcription error rather than a grammar issue.

× No, I haven't think that biceps are popular in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The student is giving a current opinion, so use the present simple don't think rather than the present perfect haven't think. The word after haven't would also need to be the past participle thought; the correction uses the more natural tense for this answer. Biceps appears to be a transcription error for bikes.