自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Then explain clearly why you did not have a bike. Use “a bike” and “when I was a child,” and avoid unclear phrases such as “very four family” and “won’t cut any bike.”

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family had a limited budget, so buying one wasn’t a priority. I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike instead.

建议: Give a clear answer first, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Use natural phrases such as “bikes are popular,” “get around,” and “get some exercise.” Avoid repeating the same idea, and check comparisons: say what bikes are more comfortable than, if you make a comparison.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and people can also get some exercise while commuting. Many people use them for short trips.

× I I don't have bike when I was child

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child

The answer refers to a past childhood experience, so use the past-tense form didn't have rather than don't have. Remove the repeated I, and use a before bike and a child.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before child.

× because my family is very four family

✓ because there were four people in my family

Very four family is not a grammatical phrase. To express that the family had four members, use the complete structure there were four people in my family.

× so I won't cut any bike when I was child

✓ so I couldn't get a bike when I was a child

Won't refers to the future or a refusal, but the answer describes a past situation. Use couldn't to express inability in the past. Get is also the appropriate verb here; cut does not fit the intended meaning.

× the bike is uh most popular in my country

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country

The answer makes a general statement about bikes, so use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are. Very popular is a natural way to express the intended meaning.

× they feel it's uh more comfortable than is

✓ They feel that bicycles are more comfortable than other forms of transportation

The comparison is incomplete because than is does not name what bicycles are being compared with. Include a comparison object after than, such as other forms of transportation.

× you can do in exercise as well

✓ you can exercise as well

The phrase do in exercise uses an unnecessary and incorrect preposition. Use the verb exercise without in.

× so it's ficycle is uh more frequently used in my country

✓ so bicycles are used more frequently in my country

The original phrase has a false start and combines two subjects, it's and bicycle, in one clause. Use one clear subject, bicycles, followed by the plural verb are.