自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了原因，但有两处需要改进：第一，注意区分“bike”（自行车）和“bite”（咬一口）；第二，讲过去的家庭情况时，用过去时“my family was very poor”更自然。可以补充一个具体细节，例如你通常如何上学或出行。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family didn’t have much money. I usually walked to school or went with my parents.

建议: 目前的回答意思不够清楚，且后半句没有完整表达。请先明确回答自行车是否流行，再用一个具体原因支持观点。注意说“children”时不需要加“the”；表达孩子自己骑车可用“ride bikes on their own”；谈一般情况时用“when they go”而不是“when they’ll go”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and commuters. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, although many parents drive their children to school.

× No, actually my family is very poor, so I didn't have a bite when I was a child.

✓ No, actually my family was very poor, so I didn't have a bite when I was a child.

这里说的是“小时候”的情况，语境在过去，因此描述家庭当时的状况应使用过去式 was，而不是现在式 is。

× When they'll go to school, the parent will.

✓ When they go to school, the parent will.

在 when 引导的时间状语从句中，即使表达将来，也通常使用一般现在时，因此应说“When they go”，而不是“When they'll go”。

× When they'll go to school, the parent will.

✓ When they go to school, their parents will take them to school.

will 后面缺少主要动词，句子没有表达完整。需要补上动词来说明家长将做什么。此处补为“take them to school”是根据上下文作出的合理推测。