自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你给出了明确回答和具体原因，但开头重复且有多处自我修正（“No, I don't”“because I am”），影响流畅度。回答过去经历时注意使用过去时，例如“didn't”和“was”；直接回答后，用一个连接词引出原因即可。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid of falling and getting hurt, so I never learned how to ride one.

建议: 你的回答主要谈过去，没有直接说明自行车现在是否受欢迎，因此需要先明确回答问题。注意时间表达和时态：“in the past”后用过去时；“too much cars”应改为“too many cars”。补充一项具体原因或例子，并避免句中同时使用“because”和“so”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and some people ride them to work to avoid traffic.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

考官问的是小时候有没有自行车，语境是过去，因此回答也要用一般过去时。这里应将 “don't” 改为 “didn't”。

× because I am

✓ because I was

这句话描述的是小时候害怕骑车，属于过去的情况，因此应使用过去式 “was”，而不是现在式 “am”。

× In the past years, umm, because in the past we don't have too much cars on the road, so people will choose to ride a bicycle, go to work.

✓ In the past, there weren't too many cars on the road, so people would choose to ride bicycles to work.

这句话描述过去的情况和过去常见的选择，因此应使用过去时。“don't have”改为过去时表达；“will choose”在这里表示过去人们通常会做的事，应改为 “would choose”。

× In the past years, umm, because in the past we don't have too much cars on the road, so people will choose to ride a bicycle, go to work.

✓ In the past, there weren't too many cars on the road, so people would choose to ride bicycles to work.

“Cars”是可数名词复数，表示“很多/太多”时应使用 “many”，不能用修饰不可数名词的 “much”。因此应说 “too many cars”。

× In the past years, umm, because in the past we don't have too much cars on the road, so people will choose to ride a bicycle, go to work.

✓ In the past, there weren't too many cars on the road, so people would choose to ride bicycles to work.

原句在同一结构中同时使用 “because” 和 “so”，造成连词重复。表达因果关系时，通常保留其中一个即可；这里保留 “so” 来引出结果。