自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用过去时描述它的特点和你如何使用。注意“coat”是“外套”，这里应使用“bike”或“bicycle”；描述童年经历时统一使用过去时，例如将“have”改为“rode”。尽量用清楚、自然的词组表达，不要重复“bike”。

示例: Yes, I had a simple blue bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven, and I often rode it in the park with my friends.

建议: 开头应直接回答，并使用正确名词“bikes”。说明人们骑车的原因时，可用“commuting”（通勤），而不是“community”；“office works”应改为“office workers”，“read by codes”应改为“ride bikes”。建议选用一两个具体例子，并用“for example”衔接。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Many people use them for commuting and short trips because they are convenient and easy to park. For example, students and office workers often ride bikes to school or work.

× When I was seven, I really liked the bike coat because I often have this one in the park with my friends.

✓ When I was seven, I really liked the bike coat because I often had this one in the park with my friends.

句子描述的是“When I was seven”时的过去经历，因此后面的动词也应使用过去时。这里将“have”改为“had”，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, I think basic are very popular in my country, because many people use them for community and short trips, especially in the crowded cities.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, because many people use them for community and short trips, especially in the crowded cities.

“basic”通常是形容词，不能在这里单独充当复数主语。根据上下文，主语应为“bikes”。表达时要确保句子中的主语包含合适的名词。