自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: You answer the question directly and add a relevant detail about riding with your friends. Use past tense consistently: say “everywhere I went,” not “everywhere I go,” and use the comparative “faster than my friends,” not “pretty fast than my friends.” You can also make the ending more concise by removing “so yeah.”

示例: Yes, I did. When I was little, I used to ride my bike everywhere I went. I was even faster than most of my friends, so I really enjoyed cycling with them.

建议: You give a clear opinion, but the explanation is difficult to understand because of unclear phrases such as “ride it by whenever they go near or follow it” and “make stronger and feeling in their amount of health well-being.” Use “bikes” or “them” consistently, and explain one specific reason, such as convenience, exercise, or environmental benefits. Avoid fillers like “uh” and “so yeah,” and connect your idea with a clear linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short journeys because they are convenient and inexpensive. Cycling is also a good way to stay healthy.

× I used to ride a bike everywhere I go when I was a little girl.

✓ I used to ride a bike everywhere I went when I was a little girl.

The sentence describes a routine in the past, so go should be in the past tense: went. Keep the verb tenses consistent when describing past events.

× I was pretty fast than my friends.

✓ I was faster than my friends.

Use the comparative form faster before than when comparing two people. For most short adjectives, form the comparative by adding -er.

× Most people around my city ride it by whenever they go near or follow it.

✓ Most people around my city ride bikes whenever they go nearby or use them.

The question refers to bikes in the plural, so it and it do not clearly agree with that plural noun. Use bikes and them for a plural reference. Make sure a pronoun clearly refers to the noun it replaces.

× Cycling can help people make stronger and feeling in their amount of health well-being.

✓ Cycling can help people become stronger and improve their health and well-being.

The original sentence combines make stronger with feeling in a structure that is not grammatically parallel, and the phrase their amount of health well-being is not well formed. Use parallel verb phrases, such as become stronger and improve, and express the idea as their health and well-being.