自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問は子どもの頃についてなので、過去形で答えましょう。「I have」は「I had」または「I didn’t have」に直します。また、「子どもだから自転車に乗れない」という理由は不自然です。まず質問に直接答え、その後に自転車を持っていたか、どのように使ったかなどを具体的に説明してください。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially on weekends.

建议: 「国が自転車に人気」という表現ではなく、「自転車が人気だ」と伝えるために「Bikes are popular in my country」の形を使いましょう。自信がない場合は、身近で見かけるかどうかなど、観察に基づいて答えられます。「Also」で文を終わらせず、理由や具体例を加えて一文を完成させてください。

示例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. They’re a convenient way to get around, and I often see people cycling to work or school.

× I have.

✓ I did.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense auxiliary did rather than the present-tense have. In a short answer, I did means I had a bike.

× I don't have a bike because I'm a child so I can't ride a bike.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, so I could ride one.

The answer refers to childhood, so the verbs should be in the past tense: had, was, and could. The correction also makes the response consistent with the statement I did.

× I think that my country isn't popular of bike because I don't know popular of a bike in country. Also

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because I don't know how popular they are there. Also,

The original sentence uses my country as the subject of popular, which makes the meaning unclear. Make bikes the subject to express that they may not be popular. The phrase I don't know popular is also incomplete; use I don't know how popular they are.

× I think that my country isn't popular of bike because I don't know popular of a bike in country. Also

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because I don't know how popular they are there. Also,

Popular is not followed by of in this meaning. Use popular in my country to describe the popularity of bikes there.