自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer responds directly, but the second sentence repeats the first without adding information. Give a brief reason or detail to make your response more natural and informative.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My family didn't think I needed one because I could walk to school.

建议: State your opinion directly without “As of course.” Correct “every game” to “everyone,” and use the natural phrase “all over the country.” Add a specific reason or example to support your answer.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. You can see people riding them all over the country, especially in cities where cycling is a convenient way to get around.

× As of course the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country.

As is unnecessary and incorrectly placed before of course. Use Of course as a standalone introductory phrase, followed by a comma.

× As of course the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the definite article the is not needed. Use the plural noun bikes without an article for a general statement.