自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問にまず直接答え、その後に理由を簡潔に説明しましょう。「my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous」のように、両親が危険だと思っていたことを表すと自然です。また、「sold the bike was dangerous」は文法的に不自然なので、理由を示す文の形を整えてください。

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was too dangerous for me to ride one, so they never bought me a bike.

建议: 「I don't think」と「not」を重ねると二重否定になるため、どちらか一方を使いましょう。また、「bicycle」は複数形の「bicycles」または「bikes」にし、「which with which」のような重複表現は避けてください。日本全体と東京を区別し、公共交通機関が便利だという具体的な理由を、自然なつなぎ方で述べると明確です。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Japan, especially in smaller cities. However, in Tokyo, many people rely on public transportation because trains and buses make it easy to get around.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family, especially my mother and father, sold the bike was dangerous.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family, especially my mother and father, sold the bike because it was dangerous.

The clauses sold the bike and it was dangerous are joined without a suitable connector. Add because to show the reason the bike was sold, and use it to refer to the bike.

× I don't think the bicycle are not popular in Japan because it is common to use public transportation in Japan, especially in Tokyo, uh, which with which we can sufficiently move to anywhere we want to go.

✓ I don't think bicycles are popular in Japan because public transportation is common, especially in Tokyo, where we can easily get anywhere we want to go.

The singular subject the bicycle does not agree with the plural verb are. Use the plural noun bicycles with are, or use the singular form the bicycle is. The correction uses bicycles are.

× I don't think the bicycle are not popular in Japan because it is common to use public transportation in Japan, especially in Tokyo, uh, which with which we can sufficiently move to anywhere we want to go.

✓ I don't think bicycles are popular in Japan because public transportation is common, especially in Tokyo, where we can easily get anywhere we want to go.

The phrase I don't think ... are not popular contains two negatives, which reverses or obscures the intended meaning. Use I don't think ... are popular. Also, which with which creates an incorrect relative-clause structure; use where to refer to Tokyo.

× I don't think the bicycle are not popular in Japan because it is common to use public transportation in Japan, especially in Tokyo, uh, which with which we can sufficiently move to anywhere we want to go.

✓ I don't think bicycles are popular in Japan because public transportation is common, especially in Tokyo, where we can easily get anywhere we want to go.

Do not use to before anywhere when anywhere indicates the destination of get or go in this construction. Say get anywhere or go anywhere, not get to anywhere or go to anywhere.