自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: You answer the question directly and give a relevant personal detail about the bike and when you received it. Correct the phrasing “it's color pink” to “it was pink,” since you are talking about the past. You can also connect the details more smoothly and avoid repeating that pink is your favorite color without adding further information.

示例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. It was my favorite color, and my mom gave it to me for my seventh birthday.

建议: You give a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but reduce the fillers and avoid repeating the idea that bikes are not popular. “Not famous” is not natural in this context; say “not very common” or “not very popular.” Use “there are a lot of vehicles” and explain how traffic affects cycling.

示例: Bikes aren’t very popular in the Philippines, especially in busy cities. There are a lot of vehicles on the roads, and the heavy traffic can make cycling feel unsafe and inconvenient.

× Uh, it's color pink.

✓ Uh, its color is pink.

It's means it is, while its is the possessive form used to show that the color belongs to the bike. The corrected sentence also uses is to link the subject, color, with its description, pink.

× In my country, uh, bikes are not that popular because, uh, here in the Philippines there's a lot of vehicles around and it's always traffic.

✓ In my country, bikes are not that popular because here in the Philippines there are a lot of vehicles around, and there is always traffic.

Use there are with the plural noun phrase a lot of vehicles. Use there is with the uncountable noun traffic. These forms are needed to describe the existence of vehicles and traffic.