自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充一个具体细节。注意过去时：说“when I was in Grade 1”，以及“ I had a blue bike”，不要用现在时“have”。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was in Grade 1, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: 先清楚回答“是的，很受欢迎”，再说明原因。注意用“most people”，而不是“most of people”；“骑自行车”可说“ride bikes”。补全句子，并用“because”或“also”连接理由，例如价格便宜、出行方便。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips.

× Yes, when I in class one, I have a blue bike.

✓ Yes, when I was in first grade, I had a blue bike.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，属于过去时间，因此要用过去时：have 应改为 had。

× when I in class one

✓ when I was in first grade

从句“I in class one”缺少谓语动词。描述过去的状态时，应补上 be 动词过去式 was。

× Yes, I think because in China most of people like to take backs.

✓ Yes, I think so because most people in China like to ride bikes.

“I think because”结构不完整；表达“我这么认为”时可说“I think so because...”。此外，根据上下文，骑自行车应表达为“ride bikes”。

× most of people

✓ most people

“most of”后面通常接有限定词的名词短语，例如“most of the people”。如果名词前没有限定词，应直接说“most people”。

× It very cheap

✓ They are very cheap.

句子缺少 be 动词。描述价格或状态时需要使用 be 动词；这里的主语指复数的自行车，因此应说“They are”。

× It very cheap

✓ They are very cheap.

这里的代词指前文复数的自行车，所以应使用复数代词“They”，而不是单数代词“It”。