自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayıp bisikletinizin görünüşü ve kimin aldığı hakkında yararlı ayrıntılar vermişsiniz. Ancak “at the middle school” yerine “in middle school” kullanın; tekrarları ve “umm/uh” gibi dolgu seslerini azaltın. Son cümle tamamlanmamış ve anlaşılması güç: Arkadaşlarınızın size bisiklet sürmeyi öğrettiğini açıkça söyleyin. Yanıtı kısa, doğal ve tamamlanmış tutun.

示例: Yes, I had a pink Hello Kitty bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a gift when I was in middle school. My friends and neighbours taught me how to ride it, and I loved cycling around with them.

建议: Görüşünüzü ve bisiklet yollarının yetersizliğiyle ilgili nedeninizi belirtmişsiniz; bu, yanıt için iyi bir başlangıç. “It is not safety” yerine “it is not safe”, “no one usually choose” yerine “people don’t usually choose” kullanın. Türkiye genelinde kimsenin bisiklet kullanmadığını söylemek yerine görüşünüzü daha ölçülü ifade edin ve İstanbul’u kısa, net bir örnek olarak ekleyin. “Like” ve “um” gibi dolgu ifadelerini azaltın.

示例: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country, mainly because many places don’t have enough bike lanes, so cycling can feel unsafe. However, they are more common in some cities, such as Istanbul, where people may use them for short trips or recreation.

× When I was at the middle school, my parents bought it for me as a school gift.

✓ When I was in middle school, my parents bought it for me as a school gift.

Use in with middle school when referring to the period of education. At the middle school usually refers to being physically at a particular school building.

× They teach me to like.

✓ They taught me to like riding it.

The answer describes events in the past, so use the past-tense form taught rather than teach.

× They teach me to like.

✓ They taught me to like riding it.

Like needs a complement here to make the meaning complete. Add an activity, such as riding it, to clarify what the speaker learned to like.

× There is no road for bikes.

✓ There are no roads for bikes.

Use there are with the plural noun roads. The original sentence uses the singular verb is with a plural meaning.

× It is not safety in our country.

✓ It is not safe in our country.

Safety is a noun, but this sentence needs an adjective after is. Use safe to describe the conditions for riding bikes.

× No one usually choose bike.

✓ No one usually chooses a bike.

No one is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending: chooses.

× No one usually choose bike.

✓ No one usually chooses a bike.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun bike.

× At some cities at Turkey, for example Istanbul, maybe they will choose riding bike.

✓ In some cities in Turkey, for example Istanbul, people may choose to ride a bike.

Use in with cities and countries. At is not the appropriate preposition in these phrases.

× Maybe they will choose riding bike.

✓ Maybe they will choose to ride a bike.

Choose is followed by a to-infinitive when describing an action someone decides to do: choose to ride, not choose riding.

× Maybe they will choose riding bike.

✓ Maybe they will choose to ride a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike.