自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsunuz; ancak çocukluğunuzdan bahsettiğiniz için geçmiş zaman kullanın. Yanıtı daha doğal hâle getirmek ve geliştirmek için kısa bir neden veya çocukken ne yaptığınıza dair bir ayrıntı ekleyin.

示例: No, I never had a bike as a child. My parents thought it wasn’t safe to ride one on the busy roads near our home.

建议: Yanıtınız tamamlanmadığı için soruya net bir görüş bildiremiyorsunuz. Önce bisikletlerin ne kadar popüler olduğunu söyleyin; ardından bisiklet yollarının azlığı gibi belirli bir neden ekleyin. “There is so limited bike place” yerine “there are very few bike lanes,” “the most biggest” yerine “the largest” kullanın. “You can’t available” dilbilgisi açısından doğru değildir; örneğin “it can be difficult to cycle” diyebilirsiniz. Dolgu sözcüklerini azaltıp cümlenizi tamamlayın.

示例: Bikes aren’t very popular in Turkey, especially in Istanbul. There are very few bike lanes, and the heavy traffic makes cycling difficult. However, cycling is more common in some smaller cities.

× No, I have never had a bike.

✓ No, I never had a bike.

The question asks about a finished period in the past: your childhood. Use the simple past, 'never had,' rather than the present perfect, 'have never had,' when referring to that completed period.

× In Turkey there is so limited bike place

✓ In Turkey, there are very few places for bikes.

Use 'there are' with a plural noun such as 'places.' The original uses 'there is' with a plural meaning. 'Very few' is also the appropriate quantifier for a small number of countable places.

× which is the most biggest city in Turkey

✓ which is the biggest city in Turkey

'Biggest' is already the superlative form of 'big,' so it should not be combined with 'most.' Use either 'the biggest' or 'the most populous,' depending on the intended meaning.

× you can't available

✓ you can't find bike lanes

After 'can' or 'can't,' use a base-form verb, such as 'find.' 'Available' is an adjective, so it cannot directly follow 'can't' in this sentence.