自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了上学路程较远这一具体原因。注意时态：谈童年经历应使用过去时；“I prefer to ride”表示现在的偏好，不适合这里。可用“used to ride”描述过去的习惯，并把“cause”换成更自然的“because”。避免将多个意思用“so”连续连接，可拆成两句。

示例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school because my primary school was on a hill. It was a convenient way to get there.

建议: 回答表达了自行车越来越受欢迎的观点，也尝试说明原因，但填充词较多，影响流畅度。“rider bike”应改为“riding bikes”或“bicycles”，“the populate”应改为“the public”或“people”。注意主谓一致和时态；谈当前趋势可说“the government is introducing measures”。此外，“encourage people to cycle instead of driving”表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. The government has introduced measures to encourage people to cycle instead of driving. This can help reduce traffic and air pollution.

× Yes I prefer to ride a bike since I was a student cause my primary school is on the mountain so I had to ride my bike to go to my school.

✓ Yes, I have preferred riding a bike since I was a student because my primary school was on the mountain, so I had to ride my bike to go to my school.

“Since I was a student”表示从过去开始并持续到现在，因此主句应使用现在完成时“have preferred”，而不是一般现在时“prefer”。

× Yes I prefer to ride a bike since I was a student cause my primary school is on the mountain so I had to ride my bike to go to my school.

✓ Yes, I have preferred riding a bike since I was a student because my primary school was on the mountain, so I had to ride my bike to go to my school.

这句话描述的是学生时代的情况，和过去的“had to”一致，因此表示学校位置的“is”应改为过去式“was”。

× Yeah, to be honest, uh, rider bike is uh, increasingly, uh, popular in my country 'cause uh, uh, governments uh, introduce some laws to encourage, uh, the populate to ride a bike instead of driving on the road.

✓ Yeah, to be honest, uh, riding a bike is, uh, increasingly popular in my country 'cause, uh, governments introduce some laws to encourage, uh, the populate to ride a bike instead of driving on the road.

这里需要用动名词短语作主语。“rider bike”不能作主语，应改为“riding a bike”（骑自行车）。