自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并使用过去时，例如“I had a bike”。注意说“when I was a child”和“really liked cycling”。后面的“a gold cycling can make money”意思不清，建议删掉或换成具体、相关的补充信息，例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的经历。尽量减少填充词，让回答控制在2—3句。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I really enjoyed cycling in my free time, especially around my neighborhood.

建议: 回答方向正确，但需要把表达补完整。可以用“because”引出具体观察，并说清楚你看到的是很多人骑自行车，还是骑行者和朋友一起出行。“mining bikers”和“going side”表达不清楚；注意使用准确词汇，如“many cyclists”和“go cycling”。最后补充一个简短的原因或例子，并减少重复和填充词。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling with their friends on the roads, especially at weekends. Many people ride bikes for exercise or to get around.

× Yeah, I have a buggy when I child, because I very like going cycling when I have free time.

✓ Yeah, I had a buggy when I was a child because I really liked going cycling when I had free time.

问题是在讲童年经历，应该使用过去时。将 have 改为 had，like 改为 liked，表示过去的喜好；描述童年时有空，也应将 have 改为 had。

× when I child

✓ when I was a child

child 是名词，不能直接接在主语 I 后面作谓语。需要补上 be 动词的过去式 was，构成完整的从句：when I was a child。

× I very like going cycling

✓ I really liked going cycling

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。表达“非常喜欢”时，可以用 really 修饰 like。由于这里讲的是童年经历，like 还应使用过去式 liked。

× I often see mining bikers on the road with her, with their friends.

✓ I often see bikers on the road with their friends.

这里说的是复数的骑车人，后面应使用与复数指代相符的 their，而不是单数宾格代词 her。去掉重复的 with her，可以让句子更清楚。