自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了具体经历和感受；但最后一句在“and”处中断，显得不完整。请用完整句子收尾，并避免在句末留下未完成的连接词。

示例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a small bicycle for my birthday when I was a child. I used to ride it around the neighborhood and visit my friends after school, which made me feel more independent.

建议: 回答中把“bikes”说成了“bags”，导致开头偏离问题；请直接回答自行车是否受欢迎。另外，注意可数名词的单复数和主谓一致，例如“bicycles”“students use”，并补充一个具体原因或例子。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips. Students also use bicycles to get to school.

× When I was a child, my parents gave me a small bicycle for my birthday. I used to ride it around the neighborhood and visit my friends after school, which made me feel more independent and

✓ When I was a child, my parents gave me a small bicycle for my birthday. I used to ride it around the neighborhood and visit my friends after school, which made me feel more independent.

句子最后的 and 表示后面还应接一个并列成分，但句子在这里结束，造成结构不完整。若没有后续内容，应删掉 and，使句子完整。

× People usually use bicycle to work.

✓ People usually use bicycles to get to work.

这里泛指人们通常使用的交通工具，bicycle 是可数名词，不能在没有限定词的情况下单独使用单数形式。泛指时可以用复数 bicycles。

× The student use it to school.

✓ The student uses it to go to school.

主语 The student 是第三人称单数，一般现在时的谓语动词应加 -s，因此 use 应改为 uses。

× The student use it to school.

✓ The student uses it to go to school.

use it 后面不能直接接 to school 来表达“用它去学校”。这里需要补上表示动作的动词不定式 to go，构成 uses it to go to school。