自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意时态：描述童年经历时用过去时，应该说“when I was a child”和“I rode”。“my back”应为“my bike”；另外，“I did have”虽可用于强调，但这里用“I had”更自然。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around our garden after school, and it was a lot of fun.

建议: 回答时使用自然语序，例如“Yes, I think they are popular”。避免重复“popular”，并用连接词引出原因。把“go up early”改为“get up early”，“by biking to their company”可改为“cycle to work”；结尾应说“avoid traffic jams”，不要重复使用“avoid/avoiding”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people cycle to work because it helps them avoid traffic jams and can be cheaper than driving.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

主语“I”是第一人称单数，be动词过去式应使用“was”，不能用“were”。建议记住过去式搭配：I/he/she/it was，you/we/they were。

× At that time I ride my back in my garden and I usually have a lot of fun with it.

✓ At that time I rode my back in my garden and I usually had a lot of fun with it.

“At that time”指过去，因此描述当时的动作和状态时应使用过去式：“ride”改为“rode”，“have”改为“had”。建议留意表示过去的时间短语，并保持相关动词时态一致。

× Yes, I think popular are.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular.

“I think”后面的从句缺少主语，且“popular”应放在系动词“are”之后。建议使用完整语序“主语 + be动词 + 形容词”，例如“they are popular”。

× Bikes are popular in my country for example, people go up early to work by biking to their company and so they can avoid traffic jam or avoiding.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country for example, people go up early to work by biking to their company and so they can avoid traffic jams or avoiding.

这里泛指道路上的交通拥堵情况，通常用可数名词“traffic jam”的复数形式“traffic jams”。建议泛指一类事物时使用复数形式。

× Bikes are popular in my country for example, people go up early to work by biking to their company and so they can avoid traffic jam or avoiding.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country for example, people go up early to work by biking to their company and so they can avoid traffic jam or avoid.

情态动词“can”后面应接动词原形。“or”连接并列成分时，后面的“avoiding”应改为原形“avoid”。建议使用“can + 动词原形”，并保持并列动词形式一致。