自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có nêu thời điểm, lý do được tặng xe cùng thói quen sử dụng. Tuy nhiên, cụm “near to Grasshopper” và “at the special street” chưa rõ nghĩa; hãy dùng cách diễn đạt chính xác hơn hoặc bỏ chi tiết nếu không chắc. Sửa “I wrote it” thành “I rode it” (tôi đi xe), và dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán như “I really liked it.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a reward after I passed an exam. I really liked it and rode it almost every day.

建议: Câu trả lời có đưa ra lý do, nhưng ý kiến chưa nhất quán: bạn nói xe đạp không phổ biến rồi kết luận xe đạp phổ biến. Hãy chọn một quan điểm rõ ràng và giải thích bằng phương tiện người Việt thường dùng. Sửa “offer committing” thành “commute” hoặc “travel,” dùng “bicycles” để nói chung, và “in my country” thay vì “in my countries.”

示例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people commute to work or school by motorbike, bus, or car because these options are more convenient for longer distances.

× I really like it and I wrote it almost every day.

✓ I really liked it and rode it almost every day.

The answer describes a childhood experience, so use the past tense liked rather than the present tense like. Rode is also the correct past-tense verb for traveling on a bike; wrote means produced written words.

× I don't think so because Vietnamese people offer committing to work or school by bus or car and maybe motorbike.

✓ I don't think so, because Vietnamese people usually commute to work or school by bus, car, or motorbike.

Offer committing does not form a natural or clear sentence for describing how people travel to work or school. Use commute to work or school to express this idea. The commas also make the list of transportation methods clearer.

× So bicycle is like popular in my countries.

✓ So bicycles are popular in my country.

Use the plural noun bicycles when speaking about bicycles in general. Use the singular country because the speaker is referring to Vietnam as one country.

× So bicycle is like popular in my countries.

✓ So bicycles are popular in my country.

The plural subject bicycles requires the plural verb are, not the singular verb is.

× So bicycle is like popular in my countries.

✓ So bicycles are popular in my country.

A singular countable noun normally needs an article, but when making a general statement about bicycles, the natural form is the plural noun without an article: bicycles.