自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “I had” rather than “I have.” The phrase “when I was shot” is unclear; if you mean your height, say “when I was short.” Also, “kind of suck” is not natural here, so describe the bike with a clear adjective such as “small,” “old,” or “a bit uncomfortable.” Add one relevant detail about how you used it.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was about seven, and it was red and quite small. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: Give a direct answer first, then explain your reason. Avoid repeated fillers and self-corrections, and use the correct structure: “In Thailand, there aren’t many places to ride a bike.” Make your explanation more specific by mentioning traffic, safe cycling lanes, or differences between cities and rural areas.

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Thailand, especially in the cities. There aren’t many safe cycling lanes, and the traffic can be quite busy. However, people may use bikes more often in quieter rural areas.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was shot.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was shot.

The clause refers to a past time, indicated by when I was. Use the simple past had instead of the present have to keep the verb tense consistent. The phrase when I was shot is grammatically possible, so it is not changed here.

× It's red and it's kind of suck.

✓ It's red, and it kind of sucks.

When suck is the main verb with the third-person singular subject it, it takes the ending -s: sucks. Do not use is directly before the base verb suck in this sentence. A useful pattern is subject + adverb + verb, as in it kind of sucks.

× Uh, not that much because uh in my country, uh, in Thailand is is there there is no like area to ride a bike.

✓ Not that much, because in Thailand, there is no area to ride a bike.

Use there is to introduce the existence or absence of a singular noun: there is no area. The original has an extra is before the there is construction, which makes the clause ungrammatical. In speaking, avoid restarting the clause and place the location phrase before there is.