自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past tense consistently when talking about childhood: say “I had,” not “I have.” Clarify the detail about the training wheels—for example, “one of the training wheels broke.” Avoid repeating “pink little bike,” and finish your final thought. Keep the answer focused and use a linking word such as “because” to explain why you enjoyed riding.

示例: Yes, I had a small pink bike when I was a child. One of its training wheels broke, but I still rode it around whenever I could. I loved the feeling of riding outside and enjoying the fresh air.

建议: Use the plural form “bicycles” or the phrase “bikes are.” Say “riding bikes,” not “riding in a bike.” Replace unclear wording such as “the easiest ridicule to asset” with a clear phrase like “an easy and convenient way to get around.” Finish the final contrast and support your opinion with a specific example.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding along the beach in my town, especially on weekends. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around because they do not need fuel and are faster than walking. Many people here ride them for leisure rather than commuting.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use did have rather than do have when referring to something you had as a child.

× When I was a child, I have a pink little bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a little pink bike.

The past-time expression When I was a child requires the past-tense verb had. Also, in the usual adjective order, size comes before color, so say little pink bike.

× When I was a child, I have a pink little bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a little pink bike.

When two adjectives describe a noun, size usually comes before color. Say little pink bike, not pink little bike.

× I did have a training wheel, but it broke one, so there's only one left.

✓ I had training wheels, but one broke, so there is only one left.

Training wheels usually refers to the pair of small wheels attached to a child's bicycle, so use the plural form. To say that one of them broke, use one broke rather than it broke one.

× So I ride my pink little bike with one wheel training everywhere possible.

✓ So I rode my little pink bike with one training wheel wherever I could.

You are describing what you did as a child, so use the past-tense verb rode. Use wherever I could to describe the places you were able to ride.

× So I ride my pink little bike with one wheel training everywhere possible.

✓ So I rode my little pink bike with one training wheel wherever I could.

The phrase one wheel training is not structured correctly. Place training before wheel to form the noun phrase one training wheel.

× So I ride my pink little bike with one wheel training everywhere possible.

✓ So I rode my little pink bike with one training wheel wherever I could.

Size usually comes before color when both adjectives describe a noun. Say little pink bike rather than pink little bike.

× Yes, I think bicycle are quite popular.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular.

The statement refers to bicycles in general, so use the plural noun bicycles. The plural noun agrees with are.

× I often see people riding in a bike or near the beach in my town.

✓ I often see people riding a bike or riding near the beach in my town.

Do not use in before bike with the verb ride. Say ride a bike. Repeating riding makes the two activities in the sentence clear and parallel.