自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答过去是否拥有自行车，注意使用过去时。表达“爸爸给我买的”可以说“my father bought it for me”，不要说“my father bike for me”；“我很喜欢它”应说“I really liked it”。补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你经常骑车做什么。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I really liked it. It was bright red, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: 先明确回答“是的，自行车很受欢迎”，再用具体原因或例子支持观点。注意主谓一致和自然语序：可以说“my friends and their parents have bikes”，以及“they really like them”；避免重复“their”。可以补充自行车常见的用途，例如通勤或短途出行。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many of my friends and their parents own one, and they use them for short trips or exercise. Bikes are convenient, especially when the roads are busy.

× Yes, I have a one bike that is my father bike for me. I very like it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike that my father gave me. I really liked it.

问题问的是你小时候的情况，因此回答应使用过去时。将 have 改为 had；表达过去喜欢某物时，将 like 改为 liked。

× Yes, I have a one bike that is my father bike for me.

✓ Yes, I had one bike that my father gave me.

one 已经表示“一辆”，前面通常不再加不定冠词 a。可以说 one bike，也可以说 a bike，但不能说 a one bike。

× Yes, I have a one bike that is my father bike for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike that my father gave me.

that is my father bike for me 不能清楚地表达“我父亲送给我的”。可以用 that my father gave me 构成正确的定语从句，表示“我父亲给我的”。

× I very like it.

✓ I really liked it.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。表达“非常喜欢”时，应使用 really like。这里谈的是童年经历，所以 like 还应使用过去式 liked。

× Yes, I think so, because my friends and their parents have a bike and they very like their their bike.

✓ Yes, I think so, because my friends and their parents have bikes, and they really like their bikes.

my friends and their parents 指多个人，通常用复数 bikes 来表达他们各自拥有自行车。后文的 their bikes 也应与这些人相对应。

× They very like their their bike.

✓ They really like their bikes.

very 不能直接修饰动词 like；应使用 really 来表达“真的很喜欢”。

× They very like their their bike.

✓ They really like their bikes.

their 被重复使用了一次。物主限定词 their 放在名词前使用一次即可；这里可说 their bikes。