自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答内容目前不够清楚，且有较多重复、停顿和语法错误，例如“my my”“get got”。先直接回答问题，再说明这辆自行车是谁送的，以及你当时的感受。使用完整、简洁的句子，并确保时态一致。

示例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike for my birthday when I was a child, and I was incredibly excited when I got it. I rode it around my neighborhood almost every day.

建议: 回答切题，也提供了共享单车和自行车道等具体理由。注意将“bugs”改为“bikes”；“shared bikes”是复数，后面应使用“they're”；“more safer”应改为“safer”。还可以加一个具体场景，让理由更有说服力。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Shared bikes are easy to find in many cities, and they're an affordable option for short trips. Many cities also have dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling safer and more convenient. For example, people often use them to travel to nearby shops or subway stations.

× that is my birthday gift from my my father

✓ that was my birthday gift from my my father

这段话是在回忆童年，因此应使用过去时。将 is 改为 was。

× To remember that when I first get got this bike, I was very excited I've.

✓ I remember that when I first got this bike, I was very excited.

原句以“To remember”开头，缺少完整的主句结构；句末的“I've”也使句子结构不完整。可以改为“I remember that...”来表达“我记得……”。

× when I first get got this bike

✓ when I first got this bike

这里描述第一次得到自行车的过去经历，应使用动词 get 的过去式 got，而不是 get。

× We can see shared bikes almost everywhere and it's very cheap and affordable for short trips.

✓ We can see shared bikes almost everywhere, and they are very cheap and affordable for short trips.

前文的 shared bikes 是复数，因此后面应使用复数代词 they，不能用单数代词 it。

× many cities have bike lanes which makes cycling more safer and attractive

✓ many cities have bike lanes, which make cycling more safer and attractive

这里的 which 指代复数名词 bike lanes，因此谓语动词应使用复数形式 make，而不是 makes。

× more safer

✓ safer

safer 已经是 safe 的比较级，不能再与 more 连用。直接使用 safer 即可。