自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“小时候有没有自行车”，再简要说明最近买车的原因。注意时态和主谓一致：用“my school has”，并将“training tech, technical”改成清楚的表达，例如“a camp to learn cycling techniques”。“daddy Sport”含义不清，建议确认想表达的是“my dad”还是其他内容。

示例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I recently bought one with my dad because my school is organizing a cycling camp where we’ll learn some riding techniques.

建议: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一个具体理由或例子支撑。注意“bike”而不是“by”，“a lot of bike groups”需要复数；避免重复“they will”，并将“go to lots of space”改为自然表达，如“ride to different places”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. There are several cycling groups in my province, and their members often ride together to explore different places.

× It's about training tech, technical.

✓ It's about technical training.

原句中的“tech, technical”像是说话时的重复和自我修正，不属于清单中的语法问题，因此不对其单独判错。可将意思整理为“technical training”（技术培训），使表达更清楚。

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child but I bought a bike recently with my daddy Sport because our school have a camp.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I recently bought a bike with my dad because our school has a camp.

“our school”是第三人称单数主语，因此一般现在时中动词“have”应改为“has”。其余调整是为了让句子表达更自然；“daddy Sport”的含义不明确，故无法据此进行可靠的语法修正。

× Yeah, I think by is popular in my country 'cause there are a lot of bike group in my province like they will they will going to lots of space by bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are a lot of bike groups in my province. They will go to lots of places by bike.

“a lot of”后面接可数名词复数，因此“bike group”应改为“bike groups”。同时，“bikes”指自行车这一类事物，作复数主语时应搭配“are”。

× Yeah, I think by is popular in my country 'cause there are a lot of bike group in my province like they will they will going to lots of space by bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are a lot of bike groups in my province. They will go to lots of places by bike.

情态动词“will”后应接动词原形，因此“will going”应改为“will go”。“they will”的重复属于口语重复，已在修改后删去；“space”若指目的地，应使用“places”。