Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I remember.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, when we are young, our kids also have a bike and we also are by bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 35.0建议: 直接回答是否有自行车。“I remember”没有说明你小时候有没有自行车。可以补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、谁买的,或你通常在哪里骑。
示例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 30.0建议: 先明确说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎,再解释原因或举例。注意时态和表达:这里可用“children have bikes”,而不是“our kids also have a bike”;“we also are by bike”不自然,可改为“many people ride bikes”。
示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many kids learn to ride when they are young, and adults often use bikes for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive.
× Yes, when we are young, our kids also have a bike and we also are by bike.
✓ Yes. When we were young, we also had bikes and rode them.
这里描述的是“小时候”的经历,应使用过去时:are 改为 were,have 改为 had。建议先判断事件发生的时间,再保持整句话的时态一致。
× Yes, when we are young, our kids also have a bike and we also are by bike.
✓ Yes. When we were young, we also had bikes and rode them.
“we are by bike”不是表达“我们骑自行车”的自然英语结构。应使用动词 ride,如 rode bikes。回答时可以直接说“we rode bikes”,避免使用不合适的 be + by 结构。