自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then explain who gave you the bike and what it was like. Use past-tense forms such as “was,” “gave,” and “had.” Clarify the comparison about training wheels, and avoid restarting or leaving your answer unfinished. One or two supporting details are enough.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave it to me as a birthday present, and I was really excited to ride it. It had training wheels at first, which helped me learn to balance.

建议: Give a clear answer about whether bikes are popular, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use natural phrasing such as “the roads aren’t very bike-friendly,” and make nouns and articles plural where needed (“scooters,” “cars,” “bikes”). Finish your thought rather than trailing off.

示例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially for short trips. However, many roads aren’t very bike-friendly because they’re crowded with cars and scooters, and there often aren’t dedicated bike lanes. As a result, some people prefer to use public transport.

× I had a bike when I was child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before child.

× It's my it my dad gave me for gift and it just only have two wheels.

✓ My dad gave it to me as a gift, and it only had two wheels.

Use as a gift to describe something given as a present. For gift is not the appropriate preposition in this expression.

× It's my it my dad gave me for gift and it just only have two wheels.

✓ My dad gave it to me as a gift, and it only had two wheels.

The answer describes a bike the student had as a child, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have.

× There's a lot of scooter and and cars on the road.

✓ There are a lot of scooters and cars on the road.

The expression refers to multiple scooters and cars, so use there are rather than there's.

× There's a lot of scooter and and cars on the road, and there's no space for bike.

✓ There are a lot of scooters and cars on the road, and there's no space for bikes.

Scooters and bikes are countable nouns referring to more than one item here, so use the plural forms scooters and bikes.