自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense for childhood experiences: “I had,” not “I have.” Avoid repeating words and clarify your description; for example, explain whether the bike was designed for boys or simply had a traditionally masculine style. Use linking words such as “because” to connect details.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was sky blue and looked quite sporty, so I thought it was designed for boys. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood.

建议: Give a clear answer and explain the contrast between cycling for sport and cycling for everyday transport. Use accurate forms such as “children” instead of “childs,” and avoid repeating that bikes are “not popular.” Add a specific reason or example to support your view, and use linking words like “although” or “because.”

示例: I’d say bikes aren’t very popular for everyday transport in my country, partly because it’s so large and many people travel by car or public transport. However, cycling is fairly common as a sport or hobby. For example, adults often go for bike rides at the weekend, while fewer children cycle to school.

× When I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The sentence refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Match the verb tense to the time expression when I was a child.

× It looked like for the man Childs, like the boys for the boys.

✓ It looked like it was for boys.

Childs is not the correct plural of child; the plural is children. In this sentence, boys expresses the intended plural more naturally. Use the correct plural form when referring to more than one child.

× It’s like a sport or the hobby.

✓ It’s like a sport or a hobby.

Hobby is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a when referring to any hobby in general, rather than the, which refers to a specific hobby.

× Our country it’s huge.

✓ Our country is huge.

The sentence has two subjects referring to the same thing: our country and it. Use just one subject before the verb to make a grammatically complete sentence.

× I think that’s we have the guys who ride a bike.

✓ I think that we have people who ride bikes.

That’s means that is or that has, so it cannot introduce the clause in this sentence. Use that after I think, followed by a subject and verb. The correction also uses the general plural bikes when speaking about cycling in general.

× The childs don’t ride the bikes.

✓ The children don’t ride bikes.

The plural of child is children, not childs. When speaking about bikes generally, use the plural noun bikes without the definite article.

× But not popular.

✓ But they are not popular.

This is a sentence fragment because it does not contain a verb. Add are and a subject, such as they, to make it a complete sentence.