自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response appears to answer the question directly and includes a personal memory, which is effective. Improve grammatical accuracy by using “I used to ride it” for a past habit, and avoid repetition. Replace the unclear phrase “my precious time” with a natural expression such as “a special time” or “one of my fondest memories.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to small snack shops with my friends after school, and those trips are some of my fondest memories.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Use “bikes” or “a bike,” and say “instead of using public transport” rather than “instead of transportation.” Avoid addressing the examiner as “Sir” mid-answer. Correct “more easier” to “easier,” and replace the unclear final phrase with a relevant benefit, such as convenience or avoiding traffic. Add one specific supporting detail.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re a relatively cheap way to get around, especially for short journeys, and they can help people avoid traffic. Many people also use them to commute to work or school.

× Yes, I think popular in my country because we can save money by using bike instead of transportation.

✓ Yes, I think it is popular in my country because we can save money by using a bike instead of other forms of transportation.

The clause after think is missing the subject and verb it is. Add them to make the clause complete: I think it is popular. The correction also supplies the needed article before the singular countable noun bike.

× And I think it's more easier way to commit the skill rewards.

✓ And I think it's an easier way to commit the skill rewards.

Easier is already the comparative form of easy, so it should not be preceded by more. Use easier by itself. An is also needed before the singular countable noun phrase easier way.